MMORPG: GODS GARDEN

waiting for the next chapter

50 plus chap and the author is still torturing the mc, one of the most boring novels so far. I'm skipping some and see if it changes, but so far, it's trash

I read until chapter 19 and I can say that you don't need to be intimidated of the NTR'ed title because so far the NTR is only the background of the character before MC was transmigrated, so for anyone who wants to give a shot but is scared, you can jump head-on without fear, BUTTTT I don't recommend this novel at all. MC is more pathetic than the famous 'Japanese beta MC' hell he even makes them look good (and I thought it was impossible)Writing: 4 starsStability: 2 starsStory Dev: 1 starCharacter: 0 starsWorld background: 3 stars= 2.2The release rate is **** too. a waste of time.

My main gripe with the story however is grammar, spelling, and phrasing. The first 20 chapters or so weren't terrible, you can definitely read passed them. Minor errors are expected on a platform that you are requires to release a chapter or two a day to be popular. The issue is the latest chapters. They read like a poorly translated novel. If they can be edited to at least the same standard of the previous chapters, I wouldn't have a problem. That being said, I do think this can reach the top ranks of Web Novel given time. The story draws you in quickly even with all it's tropes and deadpan humor. I do think to get their the writer will have to make sure to maintain the standard of the writing they've done so far as well as hopefully going back and fixing grammar issues overtime

Finally a amazing Star wars fanfic hope it never gets dropped and finishes, thanks author stay safe and keep the release's coming. Can't wait to see how it developa haven't read yet but I will love it just from summary don't let me down.

This was a great novel well told a story that kept me wondering what’s next! Fascinating and mysterious! I would give this book an overall 5 stars ✨ because it was: well written great story, had an interesting character, and was very entertaining! Well done 👍 Author

author, please don't stop. it will be extremely evil. this have great potential.

I wait patiently with my own twin swords in front of me. Liliana rushes left, right, left, left, right. She is trying to confuse me and find a weak spot in my defense. I have to admit she knows how to strategize well. Unfortunately, she does not have much experience in actual combat so I found her faults immediately.