An excellent premise marred by a terrible cast. A more generic MC would do this story a world of good. Instead, our MC complains constantly, is his little sister's whipping boy, and even after he outpaces her, is still manipulated by her and mildly poisoned for her amusement over pretty revenge. The author constantly treats this sister as the upcoming female lead. The best character is the sister's rival, who gets next to no time in the story other than to show the sister's tsundere desire for her brother. The sister is abusive, manipulative and petty. Her only redeeming qualities are her physical looks, which are common as sand on a beach in this genre for a female lead. The father and mother are quick only to believe their daughter over their son, who was historically honest with them and gave no reason to believe her over him. The story in the picket dimension is good and a solid 4 star story, but the rest of the cast and time outside the pocket dimension is miserable, or corny at best. The translation quality is acceptable, but for native English readers has some major speed bumps that make it feel like a machine translation. The grammar and word choice can be rough from chapter to chapter. This set of errors is so common that the comments have made it a reader meme. Overall, I do not suggest this story. The free chapters are okay to bad, and the paid ones are more of the same. Spend your passes and coins elsewhere!
Overall it’s a good novel. But problem is everything revolves around MC and there is no character development. MC goes the same way first lick or blackmail a widow then take her to the bed.
Nice... Am glad to see woman taking the lead. Just the prologue itself, reminds me of the mask of Zorro....this is definitely an interesting read... Fantastic plot... Go Women 🙌
Really awesome. I couldn't find any problems with the grammar either. Hope I can continue to write cause I really liked this novel.Also can u make it such that the host is slightly op?The story hasn't developed too far so I wanted to see if it was possible.
Well the story is going pretty smoothly. I recently started reading and stumbled here while searching Sherlock Holmes to read. It's my 1st reading Mystery and Sherlock Holmes so I don't know what to expect and what makes a good mystery story but I enjoyed it so far.Please release next chapters ASAP.As for the review, I like the story but I'm not really getting that much of a mysterious vibe from the story yet. I would like if you can describe the atmosphere a little more (But don't over do it ,otherwise it will be boring).As it is the 'last case' you did a great job not describing the characters too much as everybody reading the novel already knows the characters pretty well.In the end, I just started reading mystery recently so I'm not any expert, I just gave my honest opinion. So whether to take it seriously or not is up to you. :)
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