Miho the Killer

Overall: Great book keep going, the story was interesting to make push through despite the cons, unfortunately it seems to have gone on hiatusOkay, here the cons and some tips (more for improvement rather than anything else):- Use past tense, instead of present.- too much description, that sound robotic- this relates to the last point, but: too much philosophical description, adding some here and there is good, but not every action needs to be described like that (use it rarely and wisely) Exmp: "He held the pill..." not"he held the pill in his hand it's weight signifying his only lifeline in this harsh reality, as it acted as a strong reminder of the cruelty of the world.."This is more of a tip, but I think you should get a better cover (I am happy to help if you don't know how)Anyway, good luck and hopefully you come back soon.

The characters are well developed, and the story is fast-paced. The female lead is strong and smart. At 18, she is unwillingly gifted to a powerful mafia Don to repay the debt that her father owes. She was meant for the son, but complications arose. She's trapped in a place where she barely speaks the language and is without resources/help. How will she be free of the Don's grasp and return to the home she knows and loves?I'm still reading, but this book hooked me from the start because the action moved quickly. The tension is gripping. And, the battle of the minds between Ivanna, the fl, and the Don is intense.

This will be my first review ever but overall this book has amazing potential. Since I’m coming over from the authors fan fiction i already know that he has the capability and tenacity to makr this story shine and not drop it. Only wish he would give a little more detail to the characters so we can have a easier time picturing what they look like. Highly recommend giving this book a chance!

The story shouts Adventure with every chapter you turn,  Alex started as a shut-in unable to interact with the outer world but when he got sent to another world, a burning thirst for adventure emerged from within his chest, leading him to awesome adventures worthy of a read with his party mates.

"Is this the Saiyan you were talking about?" King Cold, the father of Frieza and the extra presence the Z-fighters had sensed, asked his son.

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

So much to do, so much to see