Middle-aged Love Patch

I had to drop another review   I love your book and your style of writing. Keep it up babe

Came all the way here from light reader just for this book. I just had to see the end.

the quality of translation is worsing with time and the plot is becoming boring. he could have done a lot of things explored a lot of places. instead he thinks himself something great also bored that the players aro no challenge to him. as if asking for problems problems arrive. the last plot twists are really nonsensical. if you want you can read but don't expect much. last thing the number of repeated chapters is not small

I liked it at like 1-5 chapters but when i cam to fighting and smart desicions MC fucking do some stupid things,is that even smart? And wtf is with this rating? 4.4 stars? And 400+ raters? I call bull****!!!!

cycle of repetitive and predictive plot, no surprises, he will be humiliated, get stronger, comeback to face slap his previous enemies. .. . only the first few chapters are worth reading, the rest is full of repitive cycle. No sect values

So true. 😂 They keep spamming comments about this stuff 'copy/paste',' thief's,or other. They don't Stop being so too affected and enjoy reading. And if they don't like Qi why they still using it/or this application installed?! Just uninstalled it and done .go to their respective fav/supporting website and stop blabbering on this application comments sections. This is for intended for the light novel comments and not for drama.blabbering

[Shameless author note detected] Hello dear readers, I hope you will enjoy my new novel taking place in a pirates world. If you're here to see a nice heroine, sweet, fair and pure well...don't open this book. My female lead is ruthless, sadistic, evil and will never hesitate to kill for her own goal (and her crew). ATTENTION this book is a harem, I will develop a lot the relationships to not make them rushed or secondary like what you can read in some yuri novels outthere. If you already read my other novel "The Legend of the ruthless Empress Freya" you know that my characters are known and appreciated for their authenticity and because they seem more real than real. So don't hesitate, on board and follow the next adventures of the sadistic Captain Hestia ! Author-san Lucifer 🔥 P.S : if you don't like harem, try it I'm sure I can change some minds with this one and if you still don't like it, try my other novel that is not harem (still yuri). Enjoy~

I have some mixed feelings but overall It's decent. I might change this review as the story goes. The world background is at a 5 mainly because the world has lots of potentials but that's mainly because it has all the lore and groups from the SCP multiverse. The writing quality is nice and I didn't notice any crippling grammar mistakes just a few misspelled words. The stability of updates is not consistent but could be released every 1-3 weeks (so far). The characters I don't know how to rank them. I'm not good at writing, grammar, or know an underrated story. Story development sometimes feels too fast, but that's my opinion, and the story is slowly improving on the issue. Overall it has its ups and downs, but I'm a little biased for SCP fanfic (probably because of the lack of ongoing SCP fanfic). So I'm going to give a four-star instead of a 3.8 or 3.6 star. Ps: I'm also a novice reviewer so I might get somethings wrong.