Serously a brainless story. The author doesn't know anything they're writing about.Main character is apparently from the "slums" when he lives on an island city in the United States. Really? Literally the most expensive places to live around the world are on coasts and islands.The author also constantly pushes elitist ideals when describing the entire human race. They're constantly saying things like, "Someone from the slums has no intelligence" and treat him like an animal because of his social status when that literally makes no sense. A story is bound to fail when literally every chapter is an insult to the reader, their culture, their country, or their way of life.
Great overall story. But there hasn’t been a new chapter in months. I really hope the author didn’t drop it. Only thing I can think of that is a bit annoying is that each chapter doesn’t seem connected because of the skips in time between them. Other then that it is really good and I like the concept. By the way if it is a fallen archdemon does that mean it is good?
looking forward to more chapters 😋keep up the good work and keep dishing em out so it can be better know ☺ after all when people see 1 chapter it looks like your not going to continue it
great story so farIt also has a great sense of humourI give 5 stars on all aspects besides updates.pro tip for author samawhen beginning a novel you want to bind a lot of readers which like the novel so far to your story, no better way in achieving this than updating daily. (even if chapters will be a bit shorter this way) If there arent lots of chapters already available and updates are slow, lots of people dont bother with your novel
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Really a new and interesting plot that you came up with. Liking the way story is going and progressing. The main character is different and keeps getting better. Keep going I can see the adventure-filled novel ,good story!
It has lot of familiar theme from other webnovels of it's same genre but the author presented the story in a different and interesting way The world building is slow compared to other ones as we donot know much about his world but it is good and intersting
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