Melting The Ice King's Heart

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐World Background ⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐Now that I just wrote a review for a book I didn't like, it is time to write one for a book I like.No / minor spoilers ahead.Stability of Updates: With two chapters a day, the update schedule is quite good. Although, I wouldn't mind 20 chapters a day, considering I devoured all 20 chapters in just two hours!Story Development: The story is progressing well and stands out as one of the better novels in its genre.Character Design: This is where the novel truly shines. The MC is well-developed, and the side characters are given sufficient attention. The MC thinks things through before acting, which is a relief as I hate stupid MCs.World Background: Everything is explained just right, not too much not too little.I could write some more about how MC does this and that. But that would take away from you just reading it for yourself.

I don't like the writing style. It isn't what I usually read. To say it is not novel-like. I would say it is amateur writing. The rest is good but needs improvements in the writing style. 4.0/5

having read up to the current chapter, I have to say this book exceeded expectations, and I would highly, highly recommend it. hope it goes for 10 million chapters and author writes until he's 90.

Never!       Never!         Never!

Shortly after King Michael finished his sentence, a guard rushed into the dining room and was quite out of breath.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

After that the other matches continued at a normal pace. The others with high amounts of magic were winning with a good use of their skills. The most shocking one was Langris, who impressed most captains with his space magic attack power but lost points with some due to how he brutally tried to finish off his opponent for the 'sin of wasting his time', and the others who surprised everyone were Sol, who beat Gordon after a close fight that was definitely the highlight of the competition, and the smiling kid who almost killed his enemy thanks to beating him too much with thunder punches. During this whole thing Shirou kept talking with Mimosa and Noelle about the fights, the two girls were quite excited to see so many mages fighting and so many interesting and unique magics. Even Nozel commented during the fights, asking Shirou questions on how he would deal with different types of opponents that were in the field and he appreciated the answers as the fighting theories on how to approach the situations Shirou proposed were quite decent and realistic with his current skillset. More and more Nozel thought he should add Shirou into his squad as soon as he acquires his grimoire. This thought made his mood great, which of course was spoiled by the fact his useless little brother Solid had to open his mouth to make 'corrections' to Shirou's ideas and proving, again, that intelligence and talent definitely skipped Solid during his birth leaving him with... yeah, he didn't have much to his name at all.

The idea was good, but I don't know why, by the third chapter I felt completely stupid reading it...