Mecha Hearts: The Chronicles of Destiny

"Then why did you remain weak and pretend to be dumb in a society where, if you werent smart or strong and instead were weak, frail, and stupid, you would be singled out?" Yggdrasill felt that he was talking to an idiot and that Max had basically been lying the entire time about his past.

"Sucker Father, I go."

What a deeply imaginative and thoughtful construct we have here! Hitting right of the bat with great amounts of detail in the world and the story. The first chapter is filled with intrigue about the world, the concept of the veil and the presence of the forces outside is just so well put forth that you have no choice but to be lost in it. Stanley's character is also very likeable and endearing which just enhances everything a step further. Impeccable action and thoughtful storytelling have been weaved together in a grand tale. I am planning to read this for a while and would highly recommend it to everyone as well!

This is a story with potential. I like the plot, I like the characters, and I like the world background. However, there is one thing that really leaves much to be desired: the writing quality. The words themselves are ok. They are not being spelled wrong. It's the awkward sentence structure you can frequently find, the missing words and the words not fitting the context that really lower the quality of this story. The sad thing is that these problems could be prevented easily. The author needs to do some editing, or get a beta to do it. That way this story could really be up there.

The author's writing style is captivating and engaging

The potential is enormous, i thoroughly enjoyed what i have read so far. The off hand cussing is a bit on the annoying side either cuss or don’t makes it seem a bit childish, but overall i expect great things going foward.

This novel is very unique in its premise and to be honest the synopsis attracted me as it gave true fantasy vibes like got or lotr. I highly recommend it to everyone to try it.

I quite enjoyed it and am looking forward to the sequel, which I hope will be even more captivating and filled with unexpected twists. It left me curious about what will happen next and how the story will evolve.