If like cute interactions between an mc who is not just a cardboard cutout and cute creatures, this is for you.there are many monster taming type books in this site but few in not none where the characters of the creature/monster/spirit themselves are so fleshed out. Maybe only monster evolution.And this novel is not about catching one monster than moving onto the next or just another generic xianxia with monster taming as a skin.This novel is truly about the creatures and their human partners.The interaction is so cute and more importantly, somewhat realistic.The moves and logic of the power system actually adheres to the rules set by the author.He does not pull crap out of his ass to give the mc bull**** power ups. Of course the mc has a cheat. But even with that the progression of the mc feels really natural.I suggest you all vote for this one after giving it a read. Hope it gets selected.
Well i am in the 8 chapter, the first chapter is so-so and have some problem for writhing. But the beginning of action is in the 6-7 chapter and the adventure is pretty crazy with a charachter a bit OP skill. Good reading others doist
stop saying hurtfull thing to my novel and give a real critics that could make me grow. here! I give the low rating you guys want! if you want to insult anything just comment here! i will take all your insult! i am still a noob. but i hope you guys could be more understanding, i rather if you guys comment like daremyname that give low rating but with a reason so i could processing what i should do in the future. stop with shitty shit low IQ else. i give you guys a place here to insult me the author directly. i never bother if you guys give low rating, but a hurtful thing is still hurt for me as an author. I just want to cure my-self and have some meaning in my life, i know how trashy my novel is so i don't need your insult to remind me, what i need now is critic and advice that could make me a better writer. I just want to ignite my passion with this novel....
I think the story is quite well thought of, the intro already have something happening and we are later brought into more drama. The pacing is quite good. The quality can be improved with some editing I believe, but the book, if done right have great potential. Did I say I really like the book Cover! It looks so nice!
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Gerakan tangan serly membuat batangku semakin keras saja. aku berdiri di hadapan serly lalu aku membuka celana sekolahku beserta boxer dan celana dalam.
- If the world was just like that we didn't need to reach where we were in the last world. - This time was a girl of the group, after her words I guessed that everyone here was in the same situation before... hopeless and almost surrendering. - Your words mean nothing! You can be a captain or whatever, but you don't understand anything.
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