Your writing is good but i don't really read about cultivation novels, that's why i found the chapters little slow paced. I only read 4 chapters until now, but i think the story is starting to progress a bit. I would love to keep reading further if i have time. keep up the good work.
I started reading today this Novel and I see great potential in it especially knowing that Yun Tianlong is not one of those MCs o pursue immortality like crazy.
Never have I cared more about household appliances than while I got the chance to read this masterpiece. The Author does everything in her power to draw readers into her fascinating and eccentric main character.
Author-san I believe in u! please give us more Chapters🥺 The sorry us so good and is building up for something great, I understand life gets in he way but please don't leave us waiting for long ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
So far it seems to be a mind control and transformation novel that the author originally wrote in German and has little desire to translate to English, at least not very well.
Popular Reviews