The story is extremely basic and a pure rip off of “Shadow Hack”. Writing quality is far below average and the characters are as basic as it gets. Tbh a wooden plank would’ve made a better MC. World background is never expanded on greatly. The grammar is so bad I genuinely thought I was having a stroke while reading. Getting shot in the head might’ve been a better experience than reading this trash. If I could give negative stars I would.It’s a solid -3/5 stars, if you have nothing to do on a Saturday evening I still suggest not reading this absolute waste of time
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This was pretty awesome for a short story. I would love to read a world based from this. Good job. Nice background and storyline. Fights could use a bit more gorey details but it didn't detract from the quality.
What happened to the other potential waifus!? Why did Ye Chong only married Rui Bing? Whhhhhhhhhhhy, Shang Lan my qt gone sad. I was really hoping this shy girl will end up with Ye Chong T.T
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