Master Of Death

A friend of mine recommended me this and I thought it was going to be some boring story but guess what?! I was left speechless and eager for more chapters over chapters.

Pretty good story. It's well planned and enjoyable to read. The Mc is not naive and is brutal when needed. Tbh I'm lazy so I will stop my review rn. Also to the people that spam single stars on novels, it doesn't matter for what reason, just leave a truthful review and gtfo out.

I have seen too many good/decent novels get dropped because of the reason ''oh wow, this novel has too many stars and ratings that it doesn't deserve, I'm gonna spam my review'' Like pls you haven't even read the novel, and if the story was bad then people who read it can leave a review of what they think and why they don't like it.

._. 1 review per person. This can also apply to the people who spam 5 stars. Last time I checked this ain't a dick measuring contest, if it was, it would be clear that my domineering pp energy will win, I cultivate my golden dragon day and night, I suffer an hour of anguish trying to reach the peak and feel the pleasure of heaven.

My arts have already surpassed mortal limits. To those that disagree come here and have a sword fight with this young master, my golden dragon rips the earth and shakes the heavens. Survive one thrust and you're a man above mortals, survive ten thrusts and you're a god, survive one hundred thrusts and you shall be my wife.

My pp energy is beyond your knowledge, Everyone knows me but fears to call me my real name, yet I cry, why does everyone call me Mommy or Mother. Everyone is just blind to the truth, it's impossible to not see my overwhelming pp energy, so please stop your lies and stop calling me Mommy. I may give people head pats and have people sit on my lap but I swear on the heavens these cute actions are manly.

THIS!!
This is fire

Just a simple review.

Writing quality - 5
Stability of updating - 5
Story development - 5
Character design - 5
World background - 4

Mc is evil,smart,cunning and the characters arent dumb.
I have high expectations for this novel.

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I dont know about the author affecting his rating by creating alt accounts. if thats true, its pretty scummy. His story on the other hand is also pretty scummy.

The quality of the writing is not bad, i can understand whats going on even with the weird time jumps. The problem for me is that i just cant get behind the underlying meaning and essence of this story.

The author's writing comes across the page like a child trying to write like an ***** to justify that he understands existentialism, with banal prose about an unjust universe.

The main character is evil, and doesnt really have any sort of weight or qualms about it. He goes from normal all his life to murder without any character justification. Being evil and mc is fine, there are a bunch of those and I have no problem with it. Yet, this novel really makes being evil so uninteresting.

The MCs main conviction is that the world owes him something. What?!

His life is of someone being pampered and rich with no real suffering. Yet, it sucks cause he is so untalented and its unfair. BooHoo, whine, whine, whine. Its also really annoying to read, that this whiny child then gets a chance to change his life with help from a god like being. So does the character learn anything, strive for anything, or go out there and try to be better. The short anwser is no. He arrives in a land of magic which is almost identical to his own world, but there is magic. Is it difficult for him in any sense to navigate this new world? Nope. Is there any problem with him trying to get magical powers. HaHa..., no. He has money, logistics, and manpower rightoff the bat. To then literally discover how magic is created in humans after sacrificing vagrants and the homeless. I would also like to mention that he was given some weird ethereal power for guessing things, and then he would be provided a either hot or cold response by better google.

He doesnt earn anything and is given everything on silver platter. He is unapologetic with his whining about how he is special when a god like being tells him he isnt. He is just the worst.

if you like that sorta thing, this is your novel. i couldnt make it that far in. if the novel progresses in a way later down the line to play on those themes and maybe have some character growth. thats awesome. Im just not down to go on that ride.

Eey author! Stop using fake accounts to boost your popularity and stones to wpc top 1. Its been 7 hrs and you got 61 stones? Stop try faking it! Play fair and square!! If you delete this review, I will post again  here and to the forum seeking help. You are denying the effort of various other authors out there . So man up!!!!