I generally enjoy it, but the main character becomes too powerful too quickly, and there are a lot of unnecessary time skips. It's becoming increasingly annoying.
Spoiler:
He grows to an enormous size at the worst possible times, especially since he hasn't encountered Antman or learned any specific magic for that ability. The story mentions he can transform into other creatures, but he doesn't, and later learns a different magic to achieve this instead. There are also a bunch of other issues...
Additionally, recent chapters are being posted out of order.
This is a great option for anyone who enjoys fanfiction while waiting for more substantial reads. It’s not particularly outstanding, but it’s not bad either. The main character’s ability means he isn’t confined to just the Harry Potter universe.
It's not an instant power surge, but a gradual tale of how the main character grows stronger through continuous learning. I appreciate this pacing—it's neither too rushed nor too drawn out, allowing me to savor the story at a comfortable pace (even though I finished it in just three days). While I have no issues understanding and enjoying the narrative, there is room for improvement in the translation or editing. The tag "hiding true abilities" is what drew me in. , I am very satisfied with the story.
First and foremost, this is my first review, so please bear with any awkward sentences (as English is not my primary language) and the somewhat unstructured feel of this review.
What I like:
- A very well-crafted magic framework.
- It remains faithful to the Marvel timeline in many aspects.
- The main character (MC) has a consistent perspective and moral code, which he doesn't abandon halfway through.
- The supporting characters feel alive and have their own personalities.
What I don't like:
- It can be challenging to follow the MC's thought processes at times.
- The power levels and structure can be difficult to grasp.
Now, for a more detailed impression on the points above and my personal thoughts:
### Why I Think This Magic Framework Is Very Good
I really appreciate the initial framework and explanations behind how and why the magic works. Even though some elements might seem inspired by other series (like Harry Potter), the author has given this magic system its own unique flavor. By combining different magical frameworks, the author has crafted Jerry's (the MC) personal magic system. Although not every detail is explained, the reader gets a clear understanding of the system through the MC's continuous study and improvement. Up until now, I really enjoy this magic framework, the explanations, the structure, and the journey the reader experiences as the MC strives to improve himself.
### It Stays Close to the Marvel Timeline
The Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU) is vast, and with the system the MC possesses, the author has successfully integrated the MCU and various other worlds, each with its own laws and possibilities. The author provides a well-organized and explained structure for these worlds (whether this is original or based on existing MCU content, I'm not entirely sure, so please forgive me if I credit the author unnecessarily). Despite the differences in time and the obvious increase in the MC's strength, the major events of the MCU up to the Age of Ultron timeline remain intact. The MC leaves his mark on these events but remains in the shadows to minimize timeline discrepancies and avoid significant butterfly effects until he is powerful enough.
### MC's Character
While I generally appreciate the MC's consistent viewpoint and fixed goals, I sometimes struggle to understand his character. Although the author mentions that the MC is mentally around 40 years old after reincarnation, he is quite open to killing and torture to achieve his goals. He comes across as cold-blooded and pragmatic, which I find hard to understand due to the lack of backstory or flashbacks to explain his mindset. Personally, I don't mind this aspect because he often seeks more useful solutions that bring long-term benefits, minimizing unnecessary violence. However, he is definitely not your typical reincarnated protagonist.
### Side Characters
The characters unique to this fanfiction have a lively presence and their own reasoning, which I really like. However, they sometimes fade into the background. Due to the MC's extended periods of studying and learning new magics, or traveling to different universes, the side characters, such as his family in the Marvel universe, can be easily forgotten. While I understand why the MC takes so much time away from them to protect them, it still feels like they have minimal impact on the story despite being alive and having their own thoughts.
### Power Structure
Regarding the power levels, the structure is somewhat related to the MCU's hierarchy, but it is also viewed and understood from the MC's perspective. While I generally grasp the different power levels and distinctions, it can be challenging to get a concrete measurement of someone's true strength. Additionally, there is a significant difference between the main universe and the smaller worlds the MC can visit.
### Impression
, I really enjoy the idea and concept behind this series. There are minor issues that some readers might not like, but I personally don't mind them and still find the story engaging. The only real drawback is that minor translation issues can disrupt immersion, especially as you progress further into the series. This is why I give it 4/5 instead of 5/5.
I hope my review is helpful to others. I would recommend reading it if you enjoy magic and appreciate a well-thought-out framework!
The main character (MC) reincarnates in the Marvel universe and has a system that allows them to travel to different worlds to learn magic.
Every few months, the MC can travel to another world, though not always Harry Potter. The second and third worlds are somewhat dull, feeling like filler content. The fourth world is better.
Once the MC becomes overpowered (OP), they continue to travel and learn more magic.
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Spoiler:
He grows to an enormous size at the worst possible times, especially since he hasn't encountered Antman or learned any specific magic for that ability. The story mentions he can transform into other creatures, but he doesn't, and later learns a different magic to achieve this instead. There are also a bunch of other issues...
Additionally, recent chapters are being posted out of order.
What I like:
- A very well-crafted magic framework.
- It remains faithful to the Marvel timeline in many aspects.
- The main character (MC) has a consistent perspective and moral code, which he doesn't abandon halfway through.
- The supporting characters feel alive and have their own personalities.
What I don't like:
- It can be challenging to follow the MC's thought processes at times.
- The power levels and structure can be difficult to grasp.
Now, for a more detailed impression on the points above and my personal thoughts:
### Why I Think This Magic Framework Is Very Good
I really appreciate the initial framework and explanations behind how and why the magic works. Even though some elements might seem inspired by other series (like Harry Potter), the author has given this magic system its own unique flavor. By combining different magical frameworks, the author has crafted Jerry's (the MC) personal magic system. Although not every detail is explained, the reader gets a clear understanding of the system through the MC's continuous study and improvement. Up until now, I really enjoy this magic framework, the explanations, the structure, and the journey the reader experiences as the MC strives to improve himself.
### It Stays Close to the Marvel Timeline
The Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU) is vast, and with the system the MC possesses, the author has successfully integrated the MCU and various other worlds, each with its own laws and possibilities. The author provides a well-organized and explained structure for these worlds (whether this is original or based on existing MCU content, I'm not entirely sure, so please forgive me if I credit the author unnecessarily). Despite the differences in time and the obvious increase in the MC's strength, the major events of the MCU up to the Age of Ultron timeline remain intact. The MC leaves his mark on these events but remains in the shadows to minimize timeline discrepancies and avoid significant butterfly effects until he is powerful enough.
### MC's Character
While I generally appreciate the MC's consistent viewpoint and fixed goals, I sometimes struggle to understand his character. Although the author mentions that the MC is mentally around 40 years old after reincarnation, he is quite open to killing and torture to achieve his goals. He comes across as cold-blooded and pragmatic, which I find hard to understand due to the lack of backstory or flashbacks to explain his mindset. Personally, I don't mind this aspect because he often seeks more useful solutions that bring long-term benefits, minimizing unnecessary violence. However, he is definitely not your typical reincarnated protagonist.
### Side Characters
The characters unique to this fanfiction have a lively presence and their own reasoning, which I really like. However, they sometimes fade into the background. Due to the MC's extended periods of studying and learning new magics, or traveling to different universes, the side characters, such as his family in the Marvel universe, can be easily forgotten. While I understand why the MC takes so much time away from them to protect them, it still feels like they have minimal impact on the story despite being alive and having their own thoughts.
### Power Structure
Regarding the power levels, the structure is somewhat related to the MCU's hierarchy, but it is also viewed and understood from the MC's perspective. While I generally grasp the different power levels and distinctions, it can be challenging to get a concrete measurement of someone's true strength. Additionally, there is a significant difference between the main universe and the smaller worlds the MC can visit.
### Impression
, I really enjoy the idea and concept behind this series. There are minor issues that some readers might not like, but I personally don't mind them and still find the story engaging. The only real drawback is that minor translation issues can disrupt immersion, especially as you progress further into the series. This is why I give it 4/5 instead of 5/5.
I hope my review is helpful to others. I would recommend reading it if you enjoy magic and appreciate a well-thought-out framework!
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Quite a good fan fic.
The main character (MC) reincarnates in the Marvel universe and has a system that allows them to travel to different worlds to learn magic.
Every few months, the MC can travel to another world, though not always Harry Potter. The second and third worlds are somewhat dull, feeling like filler content. The fourth world is better.
Once the MC becomes overpowered (OP), they continue to travel and learn more magic.