Married to My Cold Ex: Billionaire’s Secret Redemption

"Both will be better than to suffer the daily humiliation." Shen Zhe replied with a huff. "You were once a candidate of a first rank junior officer, Elder Brother, and now? A mere assistance of the palace clerk!"

"Yeah, its been five years passed when we have a new member. Are you sure you're in the right place?" the cyclops girl ask, Mandy just nod as a reply yes to her.

<p>Just as the last syllable rang out, Anna appeared in the backyard.</p>

Pool Elementary:

"Oh thats great man and pleae be careful at there , Major Watson! He is a psyco man !"

Jimin:"no I didn't ...I pulled out before"

My father did not sit. Instead he walked over to me and whispered in my ear, "You are not ready to know. Give me a grandson, and I will tell you. Until that day, just know you are my daughter and I love you. This is all you need to know." With that, he ignored my continued protests and left the room and my home altogether.

i really love this book 🔥💯💯 I... one of the best I've read

Potential! I must say, it is exciting diving into the world. While it's not without flaws, the potential of the plot and promise on display are certainly good.Writing - Needs improvement. A lot. But it's readable, understable and sufficient. Still, if the author can improve the writing by a level or two, it will be amazing. Tip- Focus on some realistic reactions from characters, situations and such. Plot- Since there isn't much of plot given till now, I have considered it's potential. If The author plays it right, the plot can become a great piece among 'system' contents.Character - Dialogues! they make or break the characters and it is good to see, character have plenty interaction. Well done there. Just needs some refinement.World Building- Although not unique in its genre with systems, ranks, monsters, etc. I could understand the world quite a lot from the first 15 chapters. So, I would say it was done great. Well, there is more to explore in future, so I belive again in it's potential.Overall, it is a good story. Needs editing and refinements, but still enjoyable.