When the next update.i like the story as mc is more amusing and more thoughtful than MC in other fanbase novels 💖🧡💛💚💙💜💜🖤💛🧡💚💙💜🖤🧡💛💚💙💜🖤🧡💛💛💚💙💜💜🖤🧡💛💚💚💙💙🖤🖤🖤🧡🧡💛💛💚💚💙💙💜💜🖤🖤♥️♥️💛💛💛💚💚💙💙💙💜💜💜🖤🖤🧡💛💛💚💚💚💙💙💜💜💜🖤
From what I read so far I like the story development and the way some of the characters interaction. The writing itself could use some proof reading or better grammar corrections since there are a lot of wrong tense usage. It’s a very relaxing read. Thank you for writing. Keep it up!
just a reminder. people who make undertale fanfics often drop because they feel "trapped" in the undertale universe, just remember there nothing preventing you from having a side chapter where the mc goes to a different multiverse. this way you can have an easyer time trying to find ideas and getting unmotivated due to lack of uploads. have a fine day bro.
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