Mana Apocalypse

This is underrated!! This book is professionally written and has great grammar. This book has a great concept and a lot of potenial. It seems like it may be one of the few well written harems.
My only nick pick is I really wish the author would update the book more often
I hope this book gets more attention and the author does not drop it.

Great novel all I hope is for the author to post more chapters  consistently and jest keep up the good work on the novel and don't drop the story

this isnt a bad novel its just not that good.

the grammar and the world background are all fine but the mc is a pushover with a hero complex, the story is badly paced. im at chapter 50 and he has yet to practice his skills, his understanding of the situation is severely limited considering that he has plenty of information sources around, his choices when it comes to abilities is quite poor. in a sense you could say he is fairly incompetent while receiving quite a few advantages(gold core, family background).

he spends more time on his relationships then actually optimizing his ability to survive during this apocalypse.
50 chapters and i believe 3 days have passed from the beginning of the story. for this novel to complete at the current pacing we are looking at thousands of chapters and the author will definetly not finish that kind of task. it is simply too ambitious.

its quite a frustrating read, if that doesnt put you off then you can give this novel a try.

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Great rewrite. I originally held off reading it because i liked the old version, but I am glad I stopped holding of. I love the dirction of the story and eVerything seems much more fleshed out.