Maman fait semblant d'être laide, mais Papa PDG n'est pas dupé

Here is my second book. I wrote this for fun and also for you guys to enjoy. By the way if you have suggestions, then you are free to give some. Thanks and have fun.

Honest reviews are here.. First, let me explain what the novel title "Starting with One Million Luck Points" means.. MC is the only person in the whole world that has this "luck point" in his game account.. This "luck point" can be used for him to get items, material, technique, and so on.. The more the luck points he accumulates, the better and stronger the thing he will gain after exchange with his luck points (rebate).. MC can get this luck point by kill beast, monster, insect, and so on.. The stronger the beast, the higher the luck points he gets..MC is sooo OP even at the beginnings.. But as the novel progresses, after ch650, MC started to become weak.. MC is supposed to be undefeated at the same realm.. MC used to be someone who can beat anyone, even a person who is a few higher realms than him.. But around Ch650 something, he started to have a hard time beating someone on the same realm as him.. MC is supposed to be the youngest cultivator in that realm, but later, many more come out at the same realm and almost the same age (teenager) as MC in the same world/planet.. Yes, not in a different world or different universe, but in the same world..I'm not sure why the author suddenly changed the storyline in the MIDDLE OF THE story.. Does the author try to attract his novel to another reader? Don't he know that the person who reads his novel is someone who loves OP MC, but suddenly, he changed it? After 650 chapter? Who would keep reading up to 600 chapters after finding out that this novel is not their taste?Well, it makes even more sense if the author is experiencing "writer block," and he tries to change something of his novel.. So he ask of other people opinion (someone who hate OP character) and that how he suddenly nerf the MC because the author advisor thinks MC is to OP and doesn't have rivals at the same age as him.. At the same time, it destroys the foundation of the story, which is about an OP MC experience the journey to become the strongest cultivator but middle ways, MC suddenly becoming weak MC instead..Oh well, I already stopped reading it.. Maybe this weak MC is just temporary.. But I already hate it, so I cannot continue to read it.. A few character which is the same age, and the same cultivation realm already caught up with MC monstrous speed cultivation.. If you read it, you will realise how ridiculously strong MC is, and it is not making any sense that some people can catch up with MC with MC cheat system..

In the sea of mediocrity, copy/paste stories and ****ty writing, this novel sticks out. At least for first 60 chapters. It has potential to be amongst top stories of this site. Hope it wont deteriorate later.

I'm going to continue reading this story as long as the author keeps writing. His characters development has been consistent and his storyline is not outrageous I've become a great fan of the author's writing

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World building is good. Kind of hard to understand different words and culture at times. Also there is romance but dont think of good, caring romance. Its more of hoping the women will breed his children and thats it. MC isnt some hero. I would call him a Villan actually. He uses everyone around him to accomplish his goals. He has no Rremorse for other orcs or anyone that im aware of. Still a solid read so far just pretty slow at times but still interesting.

"kau pikir aku bodoh? Shiro!!! Serang tangan dia" shiro menyerang tanganya yang memegang pedang dan pedangnya terjatuh di tanah tidak lama kemudian akhirnya raja berhasil mengumpulkan kekuatanya dan dia mengumpulkan kekuatanya dari mayat mayat di sekitarnya dia menyerap power power dari mayat mayat korban perang tadi dan dia berhasil memulihkan dirinya.

"Oh, I'm sorry Hinata-kun" The nurse Mikan Tsumiki withdrew her hand slowly without any shyness to it.