Magicapita

sounds very promising. If anyone know the name of the raws tell me. Please..................................................................

Gave it a 1 star rating for the sole reason that they said that One Piece would come to a end. One Piece will never end, and for spouting such blasphemy you get 1 star sir. Otherwise great novel but you really crossed the line.

it's grade A trash and belongs in a dumpster fire .. .......................................................................................

Start is good, but need more release rates, waiting for more chapters,hope its more different than SAOwith this 140 characters are complete

Now am wondering if this the first time the author is writing a novel the story it's not bad problem is the author wrote as if it's just for the sake..it has no plot plus it's short including its chapters no taste at all it's so dull

I only read to like chapter 10  (and I can usually read a good 30-40 chapters before I make my decision) and I had to stop it was so terribly cliche it wouldnt even qualify for a mediocre face slapping novel I have honestly never seen a translated work that was so cookie cutter to cultivation novel cliches and STILL not have any flavor like at all **** was literally like "oh no I'm a simp and I've been ntr'd by some young master and the girl likes him too it was a trap to take advantage of me so now she's a slut everyone around is trash and after my first near death encounter I get heavenly defying powers and don't even flinch guess all I can do is just effortlessly swat away stepping Stones for cheap power ups and any fight that would actually pose a challenge doesn't have anything to do with my skill and talent but my op powers takes care of it cause why not also don't forget that my cultivation system is vague af and all we get told is sutra name the cultivation stages literally nothing else and I have no doubt down the line (as seen in the ongoing 7k chapters) that to him these stages actually mean nothing cause when he'll get to core formation equivalant TM he'll be stronger than everybody on the planet cause of [insert nonsensical cultivation technique power up or miscellaneous power up encounter]" this is quite literally like my second or third review I've left for a book on this app and I've been around since it started and this terrible novel has made me so infuriated with it's less than mediocre quality that I typed this out...Translation quality was pretty good tho solid B at least

Simply amazing. I love all the coincidences and the explanations the author inputs into the storyline. However, I feel like the main character should have a more accurate description of his "skill-set." But, this might be the writer's intention in shrouding it in mystery. I haven't read to the latest chapter, but I am gradually catching up. Anyways, I am loving the story so far.

Good read, mc is doing well for himself considering he knows nothing about the future unlike a lot of the novels that follow this troupe, grammar is good, writing is good world building is good overall a solid book to read as long as the author doesn’t soften the mc up and make him less evil