Magical Alchemy: The Hero's Reversal Journey Across All Classes

Interesting novel, nice story development. good sex scene but when will you come and complete it? And the rest of your novels.pls we are waiting for you. Thanks

this is a very nice book.and it is very interesting .  .............................................................................,.......

Alright, so I guess this is the obligatory norm in this situation? But this is the 10th review. So I shall, ahem...shamelessly give myself 5 stars. As well as offer my own personal critique of my novel. I will avoid spoilers and only give what I think needs to be said.**Take this with a grain of salt as I am a completely new author striving to hone my skills.For starters, as this is made there are slightly over 60 chapters to the serialization. Much of the world has yet to be explored on both front; however, this wasn't the purpose of Volume 1.The background of the game world has been given but the complete state of both the real and game world hasn't. This will serve the purpose of generating flow in the next volume. I will try to intricately formulate scenarios that express the world's state without providing humongous lore dumps.As for character molds, I tried to veer away from the scripted and make their reactions fleshly and oftentimes comical depending on the situations. Characters with backstories, however, will have more distinct personality scenes as showed a few chapters already.Some might think the pacing for the level up and character gains are too swift, BUT, I try to this to the idea of low levels usually passing by quickly as with a real game. However, the novel will be incorporating many different paces to add diversity. So sit tight on that.Moreover, the common tropes found in these novels—I try to develop mine further. For example, the random reincarnation is not so random and instead facilitated by a being. Secondly, the random teacher making the MC OP ties into a deeper purpose; the power creep isn't easily gained.All in all, I've put a fair amount of effort that continuously accumulates into this novel. As a result, I hope you enjoy this novel as much as possible if you do give it a read. Thank you~

The first ten chapters are very instructive concerning Japanese martial arts, it incredible how much you learn from this novel, additionally, the story development so far is top notch!

I absolutely love this story! The love that the main poly couple has it so amazing and supportive of each other. but in no way was it simple and the author does a great job showing all the emotions from everyone in this new family. It also expands into the family&friends and their ups and downs, back stories and all the emotions involved. My only wish is to keep the updates steady, but I know with sickness and rough weather its not always easy to keep up. But in all honesty it's worth wait! Can't wait to see where the relationships go next, will some couples turn over a new leaf in life or continue down the wrong road ?!..

It's a historical novel which has potential, as long as there is no domestic abuse from the spouse nor in laws. I mean thus far the main lead has been abused through neglect but she shouldn't hope for more of the same treatment from her spouse. People should begin marriage with optimism or not at all. The main lead will need support to obtain justice for her murdered mother; the playboy husband will have to slowly show us his kindress, his friendship and thus grow the loyalty between them. I am curious to know if he has ever loved anyone before in a romantic relationship and if has ever believed in monogamy because I expect that to be a basic courtesy in marriage. I look forward to reading more.

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