Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Just from the 3 initial description chapters, I can guess that you have it all planned and prepared.At least most of it!So no worries about it getting dropped right!That's what readers expect most from new original novels.It is very Interesting. I didn't find any small mistakes.Good luck!Keep going!
The merchants seemed confused at first, as Lucius uttered those words and turned the jewelry around, looking at it from every angle until it dawned on him that he was analyzing the item with a skill or spell.
Zack was in shock! He said no because she is only new here and she doesn't know what to do exactly. Molly refused. She was begging him to help Molly but Zack wasn't convinced at all.
It depended on the strength of magic or curses. If they were stronger than the magic of the sword, it would be cancelled and the sword would be normal again. Thus the curse could be lifted temporarily. Nevertheless, it was still possible to fight with it normally.
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