I really like this book a lot!! I been reading it scenes it started!! I havent read all the chapters yet but Im getting there but I read all the chapter names that I havent unlocked yet and it says that the MC leaves or dies.... I hope it doesnt happen and I hope that the MC and all the girls that he is with and will be with dont die or have something happen to them!! I hope that they can some how have powers too this way they all can live together for ever and not have to have anyone die because they r to old or have something happen to where they die because of some injuries and all that!!
I don’t know if this is my first review or not, but one thing for sure I practically never give reviews ever(both good and bad). So I don’t know how to make a review, and I don’t want to learn. But If there is one thing I want to say is that this story is gold, and prob my favorite one I read this year.
Not really the type of story that I would enjoy. The 'system' is more of a minor cheat that offers a method to completely comprehend written techniques. It only allows the MC to learn techniques that are written down, drawn, or have some sort of visual que left over. Possibly sword scars would work. It does not allow him to learn techniques from watching someone perform it at least not so far. Explanations and lectures are also out. As far as it being a system, he gets a system window that gives him a record of his techniques and cultivation level. There is no menus or store functions. There is no interaction with it either except when he is able to merge two techiques. So I would just call it a cheat with a visual que.As for story development it starts with the MC captured by bandits and fortunately finds some sort of scribbling on the wall of his cell that provides him a couple of low level techniques. This allows him to slowly overcome the bandits by luring individuals to the prison. The story seems to be about how the MC is trying to acquire more techniques or higher level techniques. He goes to bookstores looking for books that will trigger his progress bar. He finds a woman with a tattoo that triggers it as well. I ended up skimming through it because it just did not excite me much. There did not seem to be much draw mentally for me.
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Writing Quality: There are some minor mistakes but the real problem I have is that the writing isn't really smooth, I can't just feel the story when I read it, the quality is averageStory development: So, the mc is not really mature, which I prefer, but he is still a child so it is acceptable. There are a few things I really don't like, first the stuff with his mother and her family, that was just wierd and you should change the story because it doesn't make sense. Second is the trust with his teacher, nobody should trust each other so easily, I mean yes the teacher knows his secret, but we don't know why she is helping him, is it because she is special herself? And that she just trusted him so fast don't make sense.Character design: He is immature, childish and a bit stupid, I hope he will get soon mature and the bearing of a true king and get stronger soon. I don't really like stupid characters, and his lying skills are so bad, and that nobody can tell that he is lying with his cultivation techniqe is really sad and should be changed.Update stability: 8 chapters a week is really good, I can't complain with that, 5 stars for that.World background: We only know that the universe is really big and we can't comprehend how big it truly is, we know that his planet is nothing but a small planet which is really weak. Hope to get more informations for that, but it is still just the sart of the story.Overall: The story has potential, but the problems which I explained, is the reason I will drop this novel, I just don't like the writing style, I can't bring myself to read it or pay for the chapters. I would recommend you to give it a try if you want, the first 40 chapters are free.
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