I think that the protagonist is quite dumb at first, I mean there are like so many people who are immortals but he only notice three years after he came.
Good work for a novice writer. The novel has potential. It's just that the streams of events happen very quickly.The characters are well written. If the author continues to improve himself, I'm sure his future works will be outstanding. I hope the author doesn't lose his motivation.
With every copper ore found, Li Fuchen would do a detailed sweep of its surroundings. Pressing on the floor or on the walls, using his qi and consciousness to explore within.
The seed started small, but as if it just found the food it so desperately needed, tendrils started whipping out and lashing for more space. The comfort Grant felt was now gone, and in its place was the most intense pain imaginable.
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