Legit one of the most interesting stories to have come across this site. 100% money maker here. I want to say take my money, but QI has a bad track record of approving the good novels for some fucking reason.Stats aren't that hard to track.... Clearly this novel is popular already.MC and the world making a interesting premise. It has a little something for everyone, and written well so that everyone can enjoy it.
Oh boy here we go.This nivel would deserve 4 stars if not for the bad grammar, although light novels are not measured with the same weight as full books publications, is still a big factor.The plot has its degree of originality, the secondary and antagonist characters are neither all smart and sly nor stupid and agraseve but instead they are a balanced combination of both, like in real life, there is not shortage of idiots that take actions based on instad gratification or pride, but there are also people that will think before acting and realize the benefits and dangers of situations, instead of throwing theur life loke idiots to the MC.MC is not bad, just that his apathic personality is not for everyone taste, he came to the current world when he was on a mission, he had a life and purpose back home and he wants to return, so he doesn't attach much to the people in his current world, he stopped giving a F.The world setting is quite original, yet a bit messy to understand, but I like that instead of a info dump of 5 paragraph describing the world, we get to understand it on information bits placed through the narrative, itbfeels more natural and makes sence, info dumping is something many LN and WN writers do, delivering block of info needs to be properly done or it will negatively impact your work.Finally, update stability is, well, could be better.
I'd grade the writing quality anywhere from B+ to A- approximately. No major grammatical errors, and the author's more than satisfactory command of English already places him miles ahead of at least half the other writers over here on WN. As for the story itself, reading this takes me back to the .hack franchise I used to love playing through (and watching) in my teens.Lastly, with regard to points for improvement? There's really not much I have on that end, considering what's already been written is already very good. The one bit of general advice I'd say applies here is to go back to your material and proofread it at least once or twice a month for any grammatical errors you may have missed at an earlier point.Well done overall.
The story is good. If this continue this novel will be amazing. The problem in grammar and spelling is only minor and will not damage the story overall. The writer also improve as the chapter progress. This novel is worth noting.
I’ll start by saying that what I read seems well written for the most part I rated the book low because There wasn’t a review pointing out a few items that I think are important. One of the auxiliary chapters talks about alignments, I got to chapter 42 and the MC seems closer to neutral evil to me as opposed to Chaotic Neutral. The MC seemed quite pleased with the despair exhibited by a character when she found food missing. Everything from the bait to the trap to me points to evil.Some people like evil MCs but I don’t, I can get behind the actions from the prologue but both interactions the MC had with people don’t seem neutral to me.Reminds me of a character from elsewhere, a great healer but while healing she would activate the pain receptors in her patients as she liked causing pain and it was her price for the healing. Obviously she was an antagonist.
I don't think that your this funny. Hahaa.. I feel the vibe of someone from you bro...And you Tales if Existence was also good.I advice a little improvement from the grammars.. then it would be a perfect masterpiece!
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!16. This is by no means, copied. It's original.
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