I am currently in 1600+ chs and i love this Novel its like a fanfic of all the universes of my favorite films seeing thoose tons of diffrent movie chrachters having diffrent lifes because of our MC or how he creates his own personas like Batman or V from other movies this Novel is a BLAST
This novel is actually retarded, in only the first hundred chapters I read there has already been some stupid as sh*t things that would happen. Sure, I wouldn't mind if the main character had only made the mistake once and tried not to do it again, but no, the mc actually has f*cking brain damage and mental retardation as it seems that he does not learn from all the sh*t that could have been avoided but wasn't because he is goddamn stupid.Other than this, the repetitiveness of the main character making an impression on the women is irritating too. Basically, they have a bad impression of MC, then MC does some sh*t, then viola! Women like MCSomething even more annoying and retarded is the fact that the MC goes retarded over anything that even bears little resemblance to his master. This wasn't actually that bad, but this was the last straw for me because honestly, the MC was just too retarded. The MC had actually "fallen in love" with this random woman that he currently does not know, and does not have any connection with, just because this cultivator woman had saved him, and the way she did resembled the way his master saved him.At this point, I gave a big "What The F*ck?" Yes, I did, because it was f*cking retarded. I would have understood and even be more interested if the MC had fallen in love due to some other bullsh*t reason that could even have some logical reasoning like his master's reincarnation, or even anything that would just sound logical.But sadly, it disappoints read that it wasn't so. As such, I think this novel is retarded, but that's just my preference, so if after this you still want to read it, then just do so, don't say I didn't warn you.
I suddenly realised that I had yet to review this book. So… here goes nothing.Short review: It’s a really good read. The stats speak for themselves.Long review:Writing quality: Not the best there is. Honestly, it can even be quite confusing at first. But the rate at which the dear author improved is scary. The writing in the later chapters might even drag you into the world inside the book. That being said, it might not be the best in WN, but not that far from it.Update Stability: It’s as stable as stable could be. Expect at least one chapter everyday, or even some ‘accidental’ mass releases.Story development: It’s not the most unique of stories. But fret not. A story is not driven by its uniqueness. It’s driven by ‘questions’ and ‘answers’, at least to me. And the way dear author used these elements is fine enough to keep you intrigued, to turn those pages (or scroll that screen to be precise).Character design: Here again, the elements of ‘Questions’ and ‘Answers’ are used. The major characters have depth and an air of mystery. But keep reading, the air of mystery will subside but depth- will increase, slowly but surely.World background: It’s a typical Eastern fantasy setting. So those of you who are veterans (and I assume that most of you are) can easily get accustomed to the world.And finally… it’s YURIIIIIIII!!!!Give it a try and you won’t regret it. Thanks.
Reading first 20 chapters lowered my intelligence, so i wanted to see how many people sticked to the story till the latest chapter. Not many and can't say i expected anything else. At the start it was all going good, but then that little girl appeared and i kinda knew it would go downhill from now on. It seems to be theme or more like an obsession with little girls that chinese novels have. They are always there to make the plot retarded to force MC into situation he wouldn't be in. It is always goes like this: 1. MC finds a little girl by sheer coincidence and out of all the kids that are dying before him you know he will save her. Not only because in the pandemonium somehow a kid voice was able to reach the MC, but also because the kid was crying while advertising her name which just so happens to MC dead sister name. What a coincidence!! Fuck all the other kids and people now he'll do everything to save her, even though he's out of shape, crippled, below average intelleigence guy with no foresight. 2. That little girl is very special. Apparently this one was 1 of 9 in the whole world, what a coincidence!! that our MC encountered her. 3. Suddenly MC will go to any lengths for that little girl because why the fu*k not, he has already died for her why not 100 times again and she's a kid who he fell in love for after 2-3 dialogues, can't abandon her now. Now this unhealthy nonsensical obsession will drive the future plot. 4. That little girl then will become the weak link/target of people who wants her 1 in a billion physique, or maybe when he's facing a god or some other sh*t, and her power will help him. Thank god he found her by coincidence in the start. 5. Apparently by another innocent coincidence he encountered a zombie way over the starter difficulty and got mortally wounded and infected while protecting the little girl and survived by just a sec again by sheer coincidence of girl having some sort of power and double personality which she conveniently wasn't able to use before, but did so now. All these coincidences in just a few chapters. Now as a seasoned chinese novel reader you already know that MC will spend his time protecting that little girl, wasting resources on her, and maybe eventually getting in relationship with her. What? You though little girls in chinese novels were for some Innocent reason? 9/10 expect it to happen. In the last scenario she was killed.MC is a retard as well. He apparently thought it was enough to prepare for doomsday with just stocking guns and food. Even an idiot would've noticed that they need more than that to survive, especially as a cripple. Was he thinking of just camping in car with limited resources that will eventually run out? Base of operation? Future food procurement? training? A google seach on how to survive apocalypse? Taking measure of system capabilities? A common guy would have searched the whole system store in his free time just out of sheer curiosity, but MC didn't. He only knew enough for plot's sake that he could buy space rings but didn't knew that he could buy skill cards and being a retard that he is, brought a car without ever thinking his retarded ass can't drive cars or even use guns to save his life. All these coincidences, and mc being a retard are just signs of bad writing by author's who can't think of better plot progession devices so they just use what everyone else is using. How is this story better than others infinite stories where Mc is in apocalypse with a little girl and a system? This one has apparently has a perverted system of some sorts for lulz i guess. Totally won't get old in 10 chapters. Good luck with your future works author.
To those who will read, are reading, or have read my work, thank you very much. I am deeply honored and incredibly grateful for the opportunity to share my obsessions, curiosities, and imagination with you. It means the world to me that you choose to inhabit the world I create, even if only briefly. I promise to write to the best of my abilities and to update this novel with at least one chapter a day. I hope you’ll give me and my story a chance to enchant you.
So far the novel's absolutely AMAZING! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!! unlike a lot of other novels with the tag 'kingdom building' this on actually focuses on it plus this wasn't some really slow paced novel where the Mc would have took 50 chapters to break the siege of his capital and another 150 or so chapters to finally regain control of his kingdom, all in all this is an absolutely fabulous novel with a very smart Mc who is talented in Kingdom building without a system and I hope you won't drop it. Also can you consider increasing the releasing of chapters or mass-releasing chapters?
Hey guys, it's a shameless author here!It's like a tradition to review your own book, so I won't deprive myself of it.My book is about a young adult, being summoned into a world of swords and magic, where there are so many dangerous creatures that he decides to become stronger to survive.I invite you to live with a real adventure with Cliff our protagonist.Your support will be welcome!!
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