Lure of Flames

I think the novel has a lot of potential. The plot and world building seems to be unique and the characters are all thought out and have multiple layers to them and I hope the writer keeps it that way. The main issue would be the occasional punctuation/spelling mistake but that is a quick fix.

I like it but it feels slow. I like the background talking about the killings. The characters design could be talked about more, and update a little bit more frequently but besides that. I want to know more of the ability’s.