I love your writing style and the narration of the povs. There are few weird grammars but all in all it was good! I also love the way you describe the surroundings of the mc. Very descriptive and broad.
even after 10chI was looking forward to reading the kingdom building nd wars. but I don't even get eased into our ml returning to his territory before a female shows up to insert herself into the novel. I'm turned of from the potential most likely partner😒😑 of our ml. like maybe if you have eased into potential candidates once I have built repoire with my ml I can be okay with it. but the mf starts out witha damsel in distress, that the ml saves, and his lust😑 and her throwing her body to him to save her issue irks me. I mean the ml tried to put his foot down and not go that route , but they end up doing it don't know each other she brings nothing to our ml but family issues , she's not even strong so what..... y do I have to read about their ship before he actually works on his territory or fights a war. uhhhhhh , it turned me off so bad so gotta rate 2/5. you may not like like my review, but thebwriting seems promising and if you can get past what i didn't like that the ml didn't even settle and he is thrown into a forced union then u can continue past. but author if you had let the readers build rejoice with the ml, see the personalities more of the potential love intrest I wouldn't have been so turned off. and she may be written as a supportive , good wife potential but the first encounter was bad.
this book cant be enjoy to normal human..i lost my braincell reading this book..cant pased chapter 5..the system and the mc super anoying. super retard
Great story with a nice writing style as well as good language use, enjoying every bit of it. Highly recommended. Chapter lengths are good and flows well. Wishing all the best to the author and keep up the good work
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