Luck is a Charm

Its better than other novels, just not by much. I find the MC obnoxious and his actions dont really make much sense. Theres quite a few tropes in this novel that i personally find extremely obnoxious, i.e MC goes nuts for random girl #7, the world building is alright, but nothing to fawn over, and the English is confusing but not hard to read. Overall its average, but as the author stated, this is their first novel so its to be expected. Pretty good for a first novel. Though, I will be dropping it because of the tropes. I personally cant stand them.

It is a very generic novel, the author at least in the first phase did not bother to explain things, he was simply writing superficially and quickly, in my opinion there was a lack of writing with more details and explanations, as it took only 2 chapters and the MC  he goes from an ordinary human who planned the death of his parents and committed suicide (he was aware of his luck, money and escape were possible) to a great powerful magician.
I reading, but it is more out of false hope that the author leaves aside worn clichés and a little attention to detail and originality.

As I was reading I was pleasantly surprised by the easy flow of the story. It's easy to read and I didn't have to go over the same sentence/paragraph twice to understand what the author was trying to say. There is good pacing, and the paragraphs were nicely aligned. It tells me that the author has already grasped the basics of writing and has the potential for improvement in the future. The author should give themselves a pat in the back. Now for the cons:

For most new writers when writing in the first person POV they do tend to overuse inner monologues as opposed to utilizing gestures and facial expressions as hints to the character's inner turmoils. Verbs such as frowning, smirking can also indicate mood. I would also like to see more active sentences rather than passive ones; it makes me more emotionally engaged.

Overall it is a very good story and a worthwhile read. Other than the writing which has room for growth, the character development, world-building, and plot progression is intriguing and makes you hooked onto the story. Good job!

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Author should really delete these 2-3 star spam reviews with no actual review in them, it lowers the rating despite how many people enjoy the novel.

Those who’ve made critic comments make fair points, if you somehow get to my review first you should take them into consideration.

Always remember : if you dont like the novel then you can always leave it

This is also a personal guideline, any novel below 4.5 is an easy pass

Another interesting book that I am going to add to my library. So far so good. Will continue to follow up! :-)

Thank you for continuously improving it too!

Not really a fan of transmigration and isekai genres on Webnovel, but I think this novel is a very fresh start towards this male lead genres and I think I will continue reading it ~~ Well, best of luck with your lucky book, author!

Master's writing skill is top-notch... This is a good book with an interesting plot. I love the mc's luck.. 5 stars because it deserves it. Keep going master, disciple had an enlightenment after reading your book