I like how the story is shaping up. He has an OP attribute in the form of luck, which is quite unique. I can also see the improvements in your writing quality.
The one thing I want to see is some kind of a rule around how his luck works. As far I have read, he doesn't seem to be lucky everywhere he goes. When does it activate? What are its limitations? Those are some of the things I would like to see.
Wow, this novel is good. Though some wording choices I could do without, but the story itself is amazing. First POV written and you can immerse yourself as you read. The MC is an interesting character and the events that are heading to a great place!
Author! You are doing so well! Keep it up!
This is a great fun adventure read. I don't know what that other reviewer is whinging about the protagonist being annoying. I found him hilarious. His personality makes this story much more humorous and refreshing than your average webnovel. Also had to feel for the poor guy, hated by his own shoddy parents for apparently bringing them bad luck. I can fully understand him hating them and being happy they're dead. I enjoyed reading his adventures in the fictional world he soon finds himself in. Here's hoping he pulls through and makes the hot girl his wife haha. From a technical standpoint, the writing is of a good quality with minimal typos and the prose flows nicely. I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a good fun adventure story with plenty of humor.
Nice writing. U have great imagination author. With constant update, i think this story will be amazing. The story is also very creative. It's very well written. Good job
ok here is an honest review and i personally think that your story is great for your first time and i find your MC really interesting . Keep it up n good luck
As a newbie, the author has done a tremendous job. Just read few chapters and I am hooked to it. It is truly an amazing read. From what I read, this novel is like a sun ray in a sky filled with dark clouds. The descriptions, plots, characters everything is really good, except some errors, but those can be edited later. I would surely recommend this novel anyone who enjoys reading fantasy novels, just like me
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The one thing I want to see is some kind of a rule around how his luck works. As far I have read, he doesn't seem to be lucky everywhere he goes. When does it activate? What are its limitations? Those are some of the things I would like to see.
Author! You are doing so well! Keep it up!
your writing skills are so extraordinary, please teach me.
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(I'll give your novel a proper review when I finish reading it)