TBh, i came to this Novel cause of the elegant cover art and was expecting something refined and gallant read. Considering how this was supposed to be a novel about the other world's entertainment industry. However i was proven wrong. Just the first chapter alone immediately obliterated that impression. Instead of a calm protagonist or a badass protagonist. We get a 2nd generation form xianxia world type of protagonist. But instead of acting that role for disguise sake like those guys from (TTNH, OEM) He was simply showing his true nature. I don't see any redeeming factor in our mc. Honestly if he wasn't the novel protag. The mc would have already ended destroyed and humiliated by a true mc type. I feel like the mc was supposed to be reincarnated to a cultivation world but samsara made a mistake and send him to this world Instead. I hate how he instantly got cocky just right after knowing that he hold the entertainment knowledge superiority. He was that kind of mc who wouldn't develop as a character for a 1000 chapter but instead he was the type who will face mack all the way till he die which just not my cup of tea. He was incredibly childish and the so-called past experiences of his was clearly that of the lower society. I don't see him surviving the upper rung with his attitude and past experiences. I only see him suppressing the upper rung with his knowledge making them forcefully comply not by his ability but only with his knowledge. Meaning he doesnt have his own ability. He can only use things that weren't his in the first place. And be shamelessly proud it. Major turn off Anways Plot and novel writing style is good and almost comparable to a pro translator quality. But still i simply dislike the mc. Seeing how he was. I dont see myself reading this in a long run. Plus the way how things are. you plagiarising real world works will put this novel the same fate as the novel i'm really a superstar not only will you gave us face smacking you will also face copyrights issues in the near future.TlDREVERYTHING IS NICE EXCEPT FOR THE MC. CHANGE THE MC AND THIS NOVE WILL BE PERFECT
This book is quite an interesting one. Although it doesn’t have much of the “promised” assassinations as I wished for, it has a quite good lead and story. A novel with a story that includes things of family and relationship development. It’s a well laid back novel although there are some quirks I have with this novel. These quirks are how the MC is just overall too underpowered - his wife was just some random homeless girl he fancies basically but she got stronger than him..., the kid that his wife had previously also is stronger and beat him in a match because of techniques (but realistically this shouldn’t happen... the difference in power is immense... basically like saying a highly skilled child in martial arts is able to beat a trained soldier who doesn’t have formal training of the arts), the amount of depressing chapters of rap* and people taken advantage even though it kinda doesn’t do anything for the story. I’d have to rate this out of the novels I’ve read a read but be sure you are able to hold in the pain for some scenes depicted. (THIS REVIEW IS MY OPINION and although it may be a little indifferent to others deal with it)TLDR: Read but hold in pain and clench for some scenes. The family moments are enjoyable to read though. Also don’t expect too much assassinations.
I find one of the most annoying, and also immersion breaking, parts of this book is how inside a video game they can somehow get drunk. And not only are they drunk, but real world tolerance affects how much they can drink. One character or another, without logging out, drinks inside the game, gets drunk, and him being drunk becomes a major plot point several times per arc.
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I don't know if my review on my book is still up or not. It shows up for me but not when I log out so I'll try to leave another one.Welcome to another yuri filled journey and hope to see you all enjoy this as much as I'm enjoying writing this.It's sad that I won't be able to know u less you either vote with power stones , leave a comment or a review (i expect you to do that to let me know you are there)Rest, i'll come back for later.
*Writing Quality: Excellent, not too complicated to hush you away, not too simple to make you believe it's mediocre, it draws you in and tells the story without much effort, great grammar.*Stability of Updates: As a new novel it is still not following any rigorous schedule.*Story Development: I only read the first chapters until the story began, and it was described and written well enough to allow me to relate with the MC, the parents, the friend and his situation as to why he would enter the game at all, however, perhaps because I haven't dwelled further it's difficult for me to understand what makes the game special, he received a message saying if he was bored of his life, but what does the game offer? and why would he encounter it in a private message rather than a poster in the streets, the game isn't public? etc.. etc... it lacks a point of inflexion that would attract readers in my opinion.Like that small thing that makes your novel unique, this, however, doesn't mean it's mediocre, this point of inflexion could appear in the future.*Character Design: So far I have seen MC some of the in-game characters, even interaction between NPCs and they're loyal to one another.*World Background: The entire premise envelops the game and I haven't delved further into the game to accurately judge whether it is deep enough or lacking, but I'm truly unable to understand what makes the game especial, supposing it allows you to get money in the real world, is that really it?Overall in my personal opinion, find myself with confused emotions regarding this novel, for one the structure is solid, grammar is perfect, description of events happens fluently, the in-game elements or representation of the UI in words is also properly laid on, but the premise is weak, it lacks a deterministic point which will attract readers to stick with it rather than keep scrolling.The cover also needs some improvements, overall I give it a high score because unlike most novels in this site, this is the total opposite, some of them have interesting premises but due to lack of skill they're destroyed either by bad grammar or a world that's not properly structured, etc...In this case, the world is properly structured, the grammar is perfect, but the world itself is weak and doesn't lead to anything that would attract (at least me) to read further because I can envision MC perhaps completing some quests and getting strong, beating a boss and obtaining loot, gaining money in real life, perhaps that's not how you want it to be, and instead plan something bigger for him, but that's how I perceived it with several short chapters and you need to portray that as well for them before the reader departs.Best Regards!
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