I've only read 4 chapters but that was already enough to get a glimpse of the MC's behavior. It's comparable to a person ordering food in a restaurant, after getting the food the person says he never ordered it and leaves.
So far nice story with good pace. It carries a light tone and seems to move towards a good direction. Hopefully the author will keep up the good work let read another good story 😊😊😊😊
Hello, Author here i'm giving myself a pretty average rating since i'm new to writing, and that i'm rather forgetful and may need to change a few things, but overtime i'll improve!
Misleading title and synopsis in my opinion.Mc is not a real Young Master because he doesn’t act like one after a few chapters he is your normal mc that struggle and fight to get stronger and even his young master act has a sob story behind it. I thought this would have a arrogant mc that has backing and comedy but it’s normal survival apocalypse story.
I wanna smack the MC's head soo much like mannnnn it was frustrating but yeah he has a realistic character growth pacing somewhat slow at times but this one is i guess "a diamond in the rough"
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Excellent stuff, thrilling experience at its max. Must read for reading who like thriller. Enjoyed a lot reading it, fantastic one. Recommended to all readers
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