For now it's good. Because it's not some 18+ fap material with a storyline as a background. I like that MC is not just running around and raping everyone. He is restricting himself. Writing style is good, it's easy to read. There are no info dumps. Idk about future chapters, so it's 5 stars for 30 chapters. Just don't copy chinese novels a lot, they have their own problems. And 1 chapter per day is enough. Quality over quantity. But try to make a stable schedule.
Exp blacker than black and darker than dark, I beseech thee, combine with my deep level. The time of leveling cometh. Justice, fallen upon the infallible boundary, appear now as an intangible distortion! Dance, Dance, Dance EXP! I desire for my torrent of level a destructive exp force: a destructive force without equal! Return all creation to cinders, and come from the abyss!Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!!-----------Oh, EXP shrouded in light Frenzied blaze clad in night In the name of the crimson demons, let the collapse of thine origin manifest. Summon before me the root of thy power hidden within the lands of the kingdom of demise!Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!------Crimson-black blaze, king of EXP sect, though I promulgate the laws of nature, I am the alias of destruction incarnate in accordance with the principles of webnovel creation. Let the hammer of exp descend unto me! ... Burn to ashes within the crimson.By my efflux of thousands exp, topple this level barrier !Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!------The tower of exp creeps upon man's world, The unspoken faith displayed before me, The time has come! Now, awaken from your slumber, and by my madness, be wrought!Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!------EXP... EXP... EXP... Wielder of the most glorious, powerful, and grand exp explosion magic, My name is d!ckbutt. The blow that I am given to strike turns a blind eye to the fate of my kindred, rendering all hope of rebirth and anguish, and the model by which all forces are judged! Pitiful creature... Synchronize yourself with the red smoke, and atone in a surge of blood!Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!-Megumin Exp Explosion Chant(Cringe yeah, but its for EXP!)
Whoever translated this work did such a mediocre job that I'd rather read depressing obituaries. There is no flow and the pacing is off and the sentences don't make sense that it's clear to readers that the translations were done via google translate. If this work is a character in a novel, it's the trash drunkard that falls in a pile of dragon dung and then slips and drowns as he tries to clean himself in the river. And nobody would even realise he's missing.
Just Try it better then stereotype CN novel and atleast there are no trash arrogant character and no 15 year old trying to kill for some ****ty crush.This novel is truly good for portraying studious atmosphere and hard-working somewhat hilarious mc.
We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give, never gonna give(Give you up)We've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye
I took a chance and spent more than Two Thousand Coins in one go to read this novel.The story is about a young man named Karl and his journey as a Beast Master in an Academy. The initial onset of the story is intriguing, and you give allowances for pacing, detail, and depth in the beginning of all novels as an author is just started to build the world. There are no major mistakes of writing being done in this novel, which is great news. Spelling is great, and the author never uses a larger unknown word when a simple one will suffice. The novel world building leaves you with the initial impression that the world is less advanced, but in fact, it is just geographical to the main character circumstance. The descriptions of people, places, and things is on par for a webnovel, which is to say lacking. I found it lacking in description, and that hurts world immersion. Pacing wise the story is a race to the finish but you are not quiet sure if it is actually moving fast or not because there is no overarching goal for the main character unless you count getting stronger of which Karl does very fast. Let me ask the question: Who is the antagonist?The main mystery is the System, the ancient power of the world dragon. In this Karl is unravelling the mystery faster than anyone has in hundreds of thousands of years. So yes, the story is lacking in sub-plots. Absolutely.The Magic system and Training. Arguably, one of the reasons many of us read these novels and we as an audience are hypercritical, but of course, we are a paying audience. There is a system that the character is trying to unlock, but is is only partially unlocked. Karl is only able to use some of his powers, but training is not confined by these limitations, yet the guy never really trains in any discipline. The initial experience of the academy was not enough to warrant his skills. I could go in more detail but as an audience member following along in the novel I found myself not being able to believe Karl was actually skilled. The written Style of BattleKarl as a Beast Master is endowed with skills such as Rend, and with some training and adjustment, he seems to be able to manipulate Rend and use it in different ways. I for one love this it is absolutely the greatest. You see this in the best novels written by the most creative writer on this platform. Yet the written battle style plays out like an MMO damage dealing scene...=( It is disappointing. If there was a build up of written word that showcased Karl's training dedication to some kind of martial discipline you would not be able to see it from the way the battles are written. They follow a buff, attack, shield, suprise and win format. Karl as a written character has not really grown. His rank has gone from Awakened to Commander leaving Royal, Monarch and Overlord left more if they haven't been reached or mentioned but has Karl grown? Nah, not really.At this point Karl has just reached Commander Rank. Write the character into some training give his skill set some depth and show us the ingenuity of him learning to use his skills outside the box.There are some incredible novels on here Aoki this can be one of them. That said, you're finding success as is so yeah Good luck.
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