LoreBound

Hello,  I am here to say keep up the good work! You have an interesting plot.

Honestly, when I read the first chapter I thought this novel is focus on dual-cultivation hahaha but turn out it's not like that. At first we might confuse about the "immoral system" and how this system works. So far the author has done a great job to developing this novel, from the story line and the characters. Even though sometimes I feel like to punch the MC hahaha (please forgive me XD) but I believe that the author will make a progress about her personality in the future. And now I'm following this story in my daily basis and I'm quite satisfied with the author's job. Well done 👍👍👍

So far im 150 chapters in and I've learned that China all around is an extremely horrible place to live just my opinions I mean besides being black and always having to read about people make fun of the MC for having dark skin and the corruption of how doctors who are ignorant get in through connections and how you have to give a doctor more money on top of the already expensive treatment fees if you want them to DO THEIR JOB CORRECTLY and the constant peer pressure of ruining your lungs by smoking and the misogynistic views of women not to mention what china is doing right now to Muslims/people with middle eastern looks china would be DECENT but you know to bad all of those things are how the author describes china or are something that has been shown in real life also the MC is a bit dull he has no motivation for better things in life which is really unrealistic in this realistic story he constantly gives away half to 1/3 of his pay to people that don't even need it for "cultivating good relationships" and for half of the story half the stuff he has is borrowed from some rich lady IDK I just feel like its another one of those cookie cutter MC's that basically only have 2 emotions or do 2 things without caring about other things which is a bit retarded cause no matter how long they've lived they'll still have desires and for some reason none of these mc's on webnovel whether it be realistic or fantasy genre don't have basic human nature apparently they've transcended that or for some reason just because they got a system their self control or reasoning is better than millions to billions of people sorry for my rant but yh this story is pretty good I do hope to see MC get married and have a kid.

Mtl !!!!! Pls!!!!!********************************$$$***************************$*********$$$$$$$$$**************************†****************************""***************************"""*"

The third piece was found in a small star. The heat was, of course, unable to affect the Grail Shard nor Tyler in any way. The fourth piece was the trickiest. It was inside a massive black hole… The chaotic laws of black holes were very dangerous, even to God Realm cultivators. Of course, Tyler and his avatars were True Gods, but they were still somewhat affected. Two of Tyler's avatars got destroyed before the Shard was successfully retrieved…

"Yes, Master?" Finral responded politely. "What may I help you with?"

"Open inventory"

"Are we there yet?" Kyle asks in the backseat as Mark and I play CoC on our phones.