I really like this story but the huge problem is that the amount of spirit stones needed to unlock chapters is a ton and I don’t even get close to enough from daily stones to open them and I don’t have the money to buy them.
This Tod is just copying things from DC. Total bull**** . Reading it just wasting time. Man I mean please stop mixing things like DC past present and future multiverse bull**** story about one world is already enough and if like to write leveling system then focus on rather than bull**** if you're making it like a game then be more like no notification about level up nothing like status screen. Overall story and it's plot is 3rd class mix of DC and sadistic love story. Sadist freak.
I love this book I really do I have been reading it sense it was in Royal Road. I like you very much but lately, most of you two chapters have been kind of short not in one of the reason I know this novel so much is because of his long productive chapters that I can play something not small chapters that does nothing but further the story with no point that's why has a fan in a reader I would like you to bring back your long chapters I'll pay the stones for them I just don't like to show chapters.
The story is great but it is being ruined by lack of seriousness from the author, writing 2 novels simultaneously
Reducing the quality & quantity of this novel.
To describe this series in a sentence, "Beautiful originality and yet lacking in all other aspects." The whole story of Lord Shadow is unique, having managed to somehow include everything from gods to aliens to a parody of MCU. The problem of this series lies in every other aspect. The grammar, character development, story development, exposition dumps, flashbacks, and romance is terrible.
Hmm this novel is unique, because you either love it or hate it, after reading like 90 chapters I can with confidence say that it makes no sense.
Hear me out, the story idea is honestly pretty good, but the writing is very erratic that has no real string to tie things together, couple that with mediocre grammar, it’s not unreadable it’s just confusing
I feel like it takes something plays with it for a bit and then forget or scrap it completely, the constant jumps between timelines are a fine idea but it’s almost every chapter, sometimes to some random characters which aren’t really relevant to the story
I will most likely drop it as it’s a bit too much of a mess for me. Regardless keep writing bud
I love this novel but I think I'm gonna drop it. If there's one thing I hate in my life, it's tragedy. It is already stated that whatever and however much our MC suffered, he's going to die in The hands of the destroyer.
So I'd rather drop it before I start crying foul later on.
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Reducing the quality & quantity of this novel.
Hear me out, the story idea is honestly pretty good, but the writing is very erratic that has no real string to tie things together, couple that with mediocre grammar, it’s not unreadable it’s just confusing
I feel like it takes something plays with it for a bit and then forget or scrap it completely, the constant jumps between timelines are a fine idea but it’s almost every chapter, sometimes to some random characters which aren’t really relevant to the story
I will most likely drop it as it’s a bit too much of a mess for me. Regardless keep writing bud
So I'd rather drop it before I start crying foul later on.
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