Lord from Beyond

I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!

why does it feel like.. this novel not completed yet... the ending is kind of abrupt...  there's also the feeling of being left alone hanging .... 😌😌😌😌

His novel is good if you want good character building, pretty solid plot, and good writing. On the other hand though, it gets tiring due to all the shenanigans happening to the MC to the point that it just gets REALLY tiring. Author wrote that the novel would focus more on the romance but God, where is it? It's taking WAY TOO long that interest just fades away. I'm gonna be dropping this unfortunately. May come back when some actual progress is happening. But seriously, there's way too much filler and unnecessary moments that it's making me lose interest.Writing style and plot is amazing, but it takes too long. I wouldn't be surprised if actual romance happens around 700 chapters.Anyway I'll be dropping this and maybe come back in the future and hopefully, by then, the tags are actually being true to itself.

good start. I love everything related to the space. this story will be one of my favorites. good luck for the author, and please edit minor typos and some complicated to apprehend sentences

............................................................................................................... The story is very difficult to read because of the inconsistent writing

'Okay this seems easy.' I thought while sitting down with my legs crossed.I started to feel like I was one with the sand and then I felt like something cracked and I shouted "ELEMENTAL INTEGRATION!"

This is mind blowing... cant wait to read other chapters

Nangong Xiao couldn't believe that his most elite company of secret guards failed to identify any anomaly when something so significant had obviously been carried out within the Chen estate last night but SiYi before him really didn't have any response to give as they had really not seen anything.