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Pros: Relatively fast-paced plot, and no actual harem, even if there are potential romantic interests at every turn.
Cons: Bland protagonist with inconsistent character development, rushed world-building, and very little tension.
, it's readable, but not particularly novel in any way.
The rest of the world-building and power system are extremely generic and average. If the novel could decentralize the MC (where there are other characters to root for), then I feel it could improve to maybe even a 4. However, as it stands, the relationships and characters are all one-dimensional.
The main reasons I dropped the novel and placed it in my DNF (Did Not Finish) personal reading list:
The main character (MC) was too overpowered and progressed way too quickly, which made the plot pretty boring. Personally, I prefer stories where the protagonist grows from weak to strong, with a slower and more believable strength buildup.
The "harem" aspect was just... too over-the-top, lacking any semblance of realism. I've read some well-written polyamory romances. For example, in "The Wheel of Time" series by Robert Jordan, the male MC having multiple love interests worked because each female character was written as a fully realized individual with their own personalities and depth. In contrast, the female love interests in this novel are reduced to cardboard cutouts. You can barely tell them apart. Moreover, as the MC gains strength, his "golden finger" seems to match him with additional wives, linking his strength directly to his "wife game." This is bizarre and poorly executed. The idea that the government would force strong warriors to have multiple wives to "save humanity" is laughable. It’s clear the author just wants an excuse for the MC to have an excessive number of wives, as if it makes him more masculine. This kind of wish-fulfillment fantasy lacks quality in world-building and character development. Polyamory stories can be written well—if the author doesn’t focus solely on the "overpowered masculinity" to the detriment of the plot.
The only somewhat interesting aspect of this novel is the action. However, there are far better-written action novels out there, so I decided to drop it after passing the 100-chapter mark (I don’t remember exactly which chapter I was on, and my browser history didn’t help).
Highly recommend for a great story.
He also becomes rash and shows off his newfound might, such as during a training camp where he destroys property to prove how 'mighty' he is. It's cringeworthy. The MC becomes overpowered too quickly, with repetitive and boring training sequences, like dreaming while checking his 'future' status or endings. The premise is good and quite fresh—using future technology to check his future self—but the execution is poor. The story becomes a monotonous, linear narrative focused solely on the MC. "I am so great, so mighty. I will train! Only I can save the world!" This mindset reflects the arrogance of a pubescent kid who thinks they are the greatest in the world, the messiah, and the only one who can make a difference.
The nationalism in the story is quite mild. There's no unreasonable hatred toward other countries. While China receives special treatment from the main character, he doesn't abandon people from other countries.
One of the biggest pitfalls of modern martial arts cultivation novels is when the main character leaves Earth and travels to another planet. However, this novel handles it exceptionally well. The space arc truly feels like a blend of sci-fi and martial arts cultivation, and I enjoyed it even more than the parts set on Earth.
The only thing I don't like is the romance. Initially, the main character and the heroine were just acquaintances, not particularly close, and there were no romantic feelings between them. Suddenly, after they meet again, they are madly in love with each other.
If you enjoy modern martial arts cultivation stories with a strong main character, I highly recommend giving this one a try.