Living with the Player

so good I spent the day reading it

raws please                                                                                                                                       

The constant mix of present tense and past tense is reallly realllllly annoying. And after reading like 4 chaps, I still don't know if you intended to write things in present tense or past tense. Other than that, there's not much to badmouth regarding grammar. As for WOrld and character design, they're very very interesting. Everything's explained in a quick, no-nonsense manner, and you can see the characters' personalities oozing out from the pages.Some passages read in a bit of an exaggerated manner to emphasize plot points and character traits, but it's nothing too overbearing.As for story dev, I rly can't say much at this point in the novel

I read like 80 chapters. Plot sorta seemed like it was going to be another novel where the mc aimlessly wanders into another situation.I didn’t particularly like that he kept getting al the divine beasts constantly. Also I don’t like the premise that taming beasts instantly gives him supremum power ups like expert alchemy knowledge or supreme sword intent or whatever. I stopped reading a while ago but I’m pretty sure it was because he literally violates a woman. Very off putting and gross. Made the MC very unlikeable.And the woman is a human carrying the white tiger in her womb. It was like totally unnecessary for things to be that way. Feels fetishistic, it pretty much was a sign I should drop this.

I don't even understand why QD choose to publish this. It's on status hiatus for a long time now and it's too similar with Monster Paradise. Save your SS it isn't really worth it. Moreover over 1mil point for this 😑😅. Well read as pastime or until there's no more chapters left to translate 😜............. this ........... 140..?...........................................................................................................................

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It's only the first chapter and I am already amazed with the writing style and story flow. Awesome work for a zombie apocalypse themed story!There may be a bit of problem with the separation of the paragraph and dialogues which makes it a bit confusing.Great job so far!