Author doesn’t show enough in 12 chapters to make this novel worth paying for the MC is still in his victim stage trying to gain sympathy from readers but after chapter 2 that sympathy turns to disgust. Honestly I can see why his ex dumped and humiliated him. I think she is a saint for being able to lead him on. Will come back if it’s free, not wasting money on it though.
I've read half the novel at chp 31 and it is almost all filled with filler most of the chapters aren't even needed or do anything for the story of the information in the 31 chapters it would only fill 5 good chapters
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this really is one of the best free novels I have ever read period; just everything about it the world building, the character development, the abilities, the power system, the quality of the writing itself everything is phenomenal!the author is also very active in the comment section, which probably doesn't mean a lot since I was the only person in there but I always appreciate it when an author interacts with their audience.(btw this is a re-release of the novel because webnovel glitched and the author couldn't release chapter for some reason, that's why you can't see my comments and why I'm so aware of the story)
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