Little Sweet Fairy

2 updates/day,not enough....dear taveya you make me greedy for more,if possible a bonus chapter in weekend

I'll give 4 stars on everything simply because you're an original author, and your book has potential, however, Mark's arrogant internal monologue just ended up giving me a headache, his character that didn't fit the descriptions you gave at the start made him even more annoying to the point where I had to give up at the end of the rooftop chapter, and just skim read ahead to at least give a reasonable review... the main things that led to my problems with Mark are that quite simply, nothing about him makes sense, he's unusually handsome yet apparently is massively depressed, self confidence is extremely important in making someone seem attractive... the man was seriously considering suicide, I get him wanting to live because the zombie apocalypse is fascinating, but if that's the case, he'd either entirely forget his desire to die, or spend some time coming to terms with it, not mention it every few minutes for you to seemingly, bolster your word count, which is honestly what the first chapters felt like...then, there's his arrogance that seems to shine through when speaking to the woman that saved his life because he stupidly said he wanted to fight some zombies, then decided to run around a sofa instead, while still acting like he's freaking action man, and seemingly, no-one even blinked an eye to it...the hints at him being a gamer in the first chapter seemed really important, then his actions didn't even slightly follow that trend, a gamer would come to terms with there being zombies fast, sure, but there are other important things they'd remember too, like if there's a corpse twitching on the ground, stab it in the head, they wouldn't just loot first, and let the zombie turn in the same room as them...

I like the premise on which the story is build on and would like to read more.                                                                                                      

I want more novels like this where the mc doesn't break through the qi realm in 2 weeks and later advance to the foundation establishment. I feel it puts more Weight on how strong a realm is. definitely should give it a read of you are bored of the old topically cultivation novel's.

Made it to chapter 94 before i decided to drop the book,  mind you the book isn't bad. It checks a lot of boxes. Sadly by chapter 94 it followed the same old tired path of every wuxia novel. Bunch of retarded power hungry spoiled morons who throw their weight around, soon as i hit that section i was like welp time to look for a new book. Now prior to that everything was going great, author made a really good world backdrop and the mc was  realistic and refreshing. The thrones concept was also super nice as that adds plenty of room in the story development. Oh how i wish the author avoided the same old super used and generic princesses, prince by the buckets who all act like spoiled morons path. Now if your ok with that then do pick up this book as it is an awesome and fun read. Good luck author keep up the good work i hope to read one of your future books that doesn't follow the same old tired wuxia moronic moves. Cause seriously if you put even 20 morons with immense power and lack of control and totally spoiled in a medieval period city complete with their own guards and backers that city will die and implode in less than a year. You will destroy the economy and security driving everyone out fast not to mention all the ones they will kill just because they are spoiled rotten morons. Now multiply that by say 1000 since you made a sex addicted emperor with a crap ton of kids. Now you see the picture i hope. That city shouldn't exist with those morons running around.

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Honestly I was hoping this would be a good read and it seemed like it was off to a good start but way to many errors and POV changes at the drop of a hat with no indication of the change. By about Ch 20 I found it al but unreadable.