Has the romance already started? Any lemons in the works? .................................................................................................................................
I'm fairly new to writing novels, so there may be mistakes or inconsistencies that I haven't noticed. But I'm doing my best to improve as I go. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to ask, and don't hesitate to share any feedback you might have. Constructive criticism will really help me grow. Thank you in advance for your interest
Saw this come up on my feed for new books, planning on giving it a try. I dunno what to fully expect, but I can tell the first couple chapters are well written and executed. Its a system which is awesome and I can get behind so I can't argue with it. There is so many slimy gross books out there just looking for whose the next waifu and this one is just lets make a good story and I am down for it!
Its ight, I can guess the development of the story line as the leader of hoplites civilization suddenly disappeared must have a connection to this world he dropped in too, I also wonder how he'll fight when his ammos dwindle out. Either he finds more escape pods of his creemates ඞඞඞඞ or that of the aliens. And he'll then use their ammo and weapons, or that he'll find a facility that is connected to the leader of his civilization. Anyways just a retard trying to act smart
Dear Author,Haven't started reading it yet but with the synopsis, I can see that it's pretty good. Im gonna put this in my collection now and start reading it. Keep it up author!!! sincerely,Loki
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