Chapter order is messed upOr the author has no idea on how to make a bookOne chapter the MC goes to some genius who's had his talent sealed to take him away, the next chapter the genius is taking the sect disciple admission test, the next chapter genius acknowledges MC as his master, the next chapter genius begs MC to make him his disciple.Either translator problem with chapter sequences or bad writing.MC has a sign in system with a disciple systemEvery special disciple he gets will give him a reward.MC reborn in a wuxia world as a direct disciple of a peak in a sect.Nothing else so far.
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I am a little disappointed. Normally this would be quite the good novel, but compared to the others in selection, this one is not as good.The story progress is very slow sometimes and at other times weirdly fast. There is no immersion and you can skip chapters without losing anything.I get that the MC is important, but it does not make sense to insert the MC in power fights where he should not be able to do anything, only for him to get temporary boosts to show of.I felt cheated during the graveyard fight. MC is apparently the only thinking individual, while does much stronger are at best a little retarded, even the MC father.Not a good start for a novel which could have potential.
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Absolutely fantastic. So far I feel like the harem has progressed really well, nothing seems forced and although there are some women who I would love to see with the Mc ,the author does a really good job at limiting the pace of the harems growth. The story is pretty good so far and has kept me interested since the beginning. The writing is fantastically well done with very few spelling errors that you probably won’t even notice. The one and only problem I have with this novel is that there aren’t enough chapters, I cought up to the current chapter 78 and now I don’t know that to do😔.
Awesome, this junior has gained enlightenment from this forbidden scripture ...I will be on my way to spread your Dao and teachings through my divine rod, Amitabh
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