Life Drain System

An average novel with lots of plotholes. I don't like the MC. It's more like a wish-fulfillment story. Anyway, good luck, author.

The Good: The editing rarely makes mistakes and the writing is straightforward. The story moves along at a pace that laughs at the slow pace Chinese stories love. The author seems to have a vision and is writing it.

The Bad: We're definitely in wish fulfillment territory. The thing that seemed to take the longest was the MC getting his system. The MC borders on leaning on his plot armor and the 4th wall intentionally. Everything is kind of canned otherwise. Dateless loser? Quest to get one. Best friend shows up and immediately offers up his sister. Lots of things are explained by info dumps. The system is so helpful that the MC doesn't have to be smart. Multiple times the MC is in danger or is greedy and with a smile and raise of the hand, the system or the world bend to his will. I have put food effort into reading this, but even I have to stop after a few chapters to give myself a break. I've never seen MC struggle to overcome something and by now, I'm kind of tried of looking.

The characters are uninspired. The author, as far as I got, worked too hard showing us that their talent was wasted telling instead of showing. Most of the author's weaknesses are in their interpersonal and cultural understandings.

The greatest moment I encountered in the story, where the author was showing their spark, was when the FL spoke French. It was an opportunity for many things, but many, if not all, were wasted. The MC apparently spoke French too, a dead language, in the future, in an area with predominantly Chinese names. It could have been a moment to show the MC having a gap in his knowledge, and thus himself, or to use his skills or the system to overcome. Instead the MC was too cool for human weakness and was perfect. Yay.

My final conclusion is that while I look forward to the growth of this author, I'll be looking forward to their next book, rather than more chapters of this one. Whomever their editor and proofreader is, they have my praise and I hope the author realizes the blessing they have.

I love this story, fun, interesting, logical, and so much more. Totally recommend reading this. Keep up the good work bro. By the way, you should make a Discord, or Patreon.

Great job, I am on chapter 10 now, and loving it. It is wonderful to think such a romance can start so fast, and smooth, even with the imperfections. Though sometimes what starts with a flame, rapidly burns out, should be interesting. It is wonderful how Yue is able to learn fast, grow stronger, and make profits so quick, in peoples hearts we often wish we could do so.  It is like living an adventuresome dream.

Interesting story and plot.  Great job, The main character is great .   Especially the trials he is going through , from start to this point .  We all have trials, hopefully improve from them, but rarely do I see benefits soon after.   It is great to think of rapid benefits .    Lead character is helpful and sacrificing , with standards that are refreshing.

This is a true hero, helpful, working hard to progress, and giving consequences to actions that are not good. Romance, with cultivation, and progression. I need one of those rings. Something to help dreams come true.

First book I decided to read here, great story, great plot. Fantastic adventure.   Looking forward to when I have more time to read.   Makes me want to read all night .

Thank you.   Great book, loving the progress from simple person, receiving gift that changes life.  Then progression to cultivating and leadership .   Helping others along the way .