I really tried to read this, but the English and grammar are all messed up. The story is very unique and interesting, but it's so hard to read. The book does not flow and is choppy. If the author found a good editor to help the story flow, fix grammar, and spelling, it would be a 5 Star Story.
Initially I wanted to wait for a few more chapters before I give my review but because I want to be one of the first ten, he it is.First things first, the writing quality is top notch, it's a top tier and a rare quality in this website. 5/5Second, the story itself is unique and a very original one, in short it is one of the kind. 5/5As for the characters, although for now they're still not a lot, they're all nicely written. They have their own feelings and is not a bland characters. 5/5The updating rate is quite unstable but it is understandable because of the fact that the author is also currently writing his other novels, for now. 5/5And lastly, the world background. Considering that this novel only has 14 chapters for now, it is doing a good job so far. The descriptions were easy to understand and imagine. 5/5P. S. I highly recommend to read this novel now and become a new, Reader of Fate.
This book is a whirlwind, beautifully written thought provoking and intensely heartbreaking at times all in all a great read ,I just hope the author doesn't drop this abstract story coz it's truly beautiful 🌈👍🏽💯💕PS: please let Liam fall for Luke he deserves someone kind and safe ,let Damien die protecting him🤭
This story is very well written so far. The only problem with it thus far is the grammatical mistakes, but there arent many. Overall I'm looking forward to more chapters!
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