Great story. I read the 1st volume in one go and it was great. It starts pretty hectic, like in the middle of a war. Then we see more of the characters in the later chapters in the first volume.
Honestly couldn't read this novel only has MC finds something asks in chat full of low IQ what that is it was funny 1-2 times but tooo repetitive bored dropped
the story is great and very entertaining. it has a strong "Lord of the mysteries" vibe so if you are a fan, this book will be right in your alley. characters are well designed and not shallow. Plot is well thought and complex. The only con is the English which is not perfect, otherwise this would deserve a 5/5.
Its a captivating story. As the story progresses it has not become dull. Can't wait for nire chapters, 6 is not enough. Characters seem strong overall. Sia has a lot of potential. Environment has potential to be creepy. Giant insects, yea we have a problem.
The setting seems to be pretty cool and I am quite interested about the world of your story. You did great with writing the king as he is a very hateable character and the system seems to be pretty interesting. Although I got to admit that the dialogue feels kind of iffy at times.All in all, I would say that this is story has potential. Keep up the good work!
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