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excellent storyI love it, keep updating regularly, I can't wait to do the rest.good perssonage constructionupdate more remember please because I love this kind of novel
The ideas and world building were top-notched. You have such a creative imagination to make a good novel like this. With more exposure, this will become big. I like the characters and the plot. Also the flow was stable, not a bumpy ride for me π Kudos! and good job!
Xin Fan's heart tightened. 'How did he know where I was?'. Xin Fan leaped out of the bush and closed in. However before he could get close, he felt a gut wrenching pain in his chest. Without any notice, he found himself shooting backwards. It was lucky that there was a large rock that absorbed the impact lest he fell off the mountain.
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