**JD/AUTHOR* YOU DESERVE ALL THE FLOWERS! THERE ARE WRITERS IN THE WORLD & THEN THERE ARE INCREDIBLE WRITERS! YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER. I USED TO HATE READING. YOUR WRITING MAKES ME FEEL EVERYTHING THAT YOU WRITE. YOU WRITE THE REAL EMOTIONS THAT ONE GOES THROUGH & WE FEEL IT ALL! MORE THAN 5 STARS
I've read the story on lnmtl. Amazing story.Other name: History's strongest husbandRaw name: 史上最强赘婿Status: 700 chapters (Completed)Novel update SummaryThe little handsome son-in-law passed through a world as a waste material and the husband of a wealthy family. But because of his lackadaisical aptitude, the wealthy family had driven him out. So he worked hard and found a more powerful family’s thighs to hold onto.Soon enough, he became the strongest son-in-law and husband in history.In this world, it was impossible to practice martial arts. It was futile so he might as well take advantage of his wife’s thighs and maintain a comfortable and leisure lifestyle.He’ll train his wife to become the strongest and best person in the world.“Whoever dares to provoke me, let my wife kill you!”
Just a disclaimer before everyone reads the novel and also a shameless 5 star review, because why not? Now let's take all of these aside and actually talk about the nitty-gritty of this review. I mean, I could not add any reasons as to why I gave my own novel a 5 star review, but it's better if there's a reason.The good things of this novel, or kinda? Still depends on your preferences in the end. But oh well, let's see.. Pros:t1. Dao of Sticc - Should I expound more on the greatness of the sticc? Yes, I shall expound. The greatness of the sticc lies on the fact that the upon looking at the sticc, everything suddenly doesn't matter anymore except the sticc. The sticc is da wae and it is everything. It's like weed but legal. ;) No FBI plz >.<tt2. Overpowered MC? - There's somewhat a caveat to this within the early chapters of this novel. The MC that I designed acquired a really powerful class as shown by the synopsis and the title. u000bu000bBut sadly, his scars due to his past makes him a really unconfident and cautious MC that only acts when pushed. Fortunately, the first 60 chaps of this novel is all about his development. In the end, you will still get the Overpowered MC that you rightfully deserved, not just in a retarded method or manner.u000bt3. Romance - My readers at AS(don't ask me about AS anyways) told me that I have a pretty good handle when it comes to relationships. Although I admit that I was heavily criticized back then due to the sudden development that arrived without any forewarning. I have learned my lessons already and forgive me about my past mistakes, I'm a new man now. (But don't ask me about AS thx).t4. Dynamic Characters? = I am writing this as of Chapter 60 and I can say that I made a pretty good job when it comes to characterizations. But as an author, I will always be biased towards my creation so I will not comment that much about how dynamic my characters are since they will always be perfect for me… But what do you think?t5. Daily Updates = I have a sizeable backlog of chapters ready to be released if I get sick or is away for some reason. Hopefully it doesn't disappear in the future since I have the attention span of a gold fish and is always lazy, or distracted when it comes to writing.tt6. No Plot Holes? = So far, as of chapter 60. I found every plothole that I could find but if there's a plot hole that greatly affects the novel. You can communicate with me at the comment section any moment. For every authors, the comment section is our source of energy and motivation. So, please comment! t7. No characters left behind = Every character mentioned in this novel, apart from those that do not have any names will still be present in the future. They just don't disappear and be forgotten. Only characters who are not worthy of being named are disposed off…(feelsbadman). Now let's start talking about the bad things about this novel or else I will continue on bootlick my own novel to infinity >. <t1. Too verbose = I really like explaining things. Particularly how the characters feel in a certain situation, or their expressions. That's just how my writing style works so, I find it hard to change it into something suitable or is not jarring for the general audience? What do you think about my style?t2. Chapter Release Rate = I am planning on dedicating myself on releasing at least one chapter a day, what I mean by 1 chapter a day is I release one but actually write two. The other chapter is used for my backlog of unreleased chapters for the sake of mass release, or if I am absent due to sickness or work.t3. Somewhat Jarring start for Character Development = The first 60 chapters of this novel is dedicated for the development of the MC. This is unavoidable and you may find it annoying about how the MC doesn't use his strength to the full potential. Don't blame him too much, he's just too cautious and afraid of failure, especially if he has something great to lose. But that changes when he has nothing to lose ;)u000bt4. Harem? Or not? No it's not a harem! Well, maybe it is? Wait, I don't know? Just what is the answer, author?! = The MC will have a wife in the virtual world, but he will also have a girlfriend irl. I don't know if this can be considered as a harem, so I will just have you guys decide if you consider this harem.u000bOkay, disclaimer done! Honestly, I think that I should have a lot more listed under the (bad things about this novel) tab but I am subconsciously biased against my novel to the extent that I am delusional that it is perfect… But here's a silver-lining.t1. Read this novel as if it's not realistic = I strive on keeping everything realistic, but this is still a fiction in the end. So read it as a fiction not a documentary.tt2. Keep an eye out for some plot clues, I am the type of writer that often leaves out clues for the readers to figure out. But I don't know why? Maybe I just love mystery things too much that I want to expound more on the greatness of subtlety? tt3. Don't ask me about AS.tt4. Enjoy the read! Don't forget to comment since comments lube up my chocolate starfish real good (nohomo btw).
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I have only just started reading this novel so I can’t comment on much, but I have noticed something I think the author should know. The writing in chapter 8 is pretty awkward. I could tell something was off in the previous chapters but I wasn’t able to pin point it until now. I finally realized the problem while reading the fight scenes of chapter 8. The tense frequently switches from past tense to present tense. One of the main rules in writing is to choose a tense and stick with it. Otherwise it makes the pacing of each scene feel all messed up and off. Going back and editing all of the chapters with conflicting tenses and converting them all into past tense would make the story flow a lot smoother and improve the general quality of the writing. I recommend past tense because it is the one more suited to this kind of story. If you would like specific examples of where I think these problems are and could be improved. I would be happy to help.
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