Legends Reborn Online

Writing Quality great.Stoy it's too early to judge but it look good.Character Design I halfway do not care I just hope the last people is black. Updating is great but u probably shed upload one chapters a day after 150 ch.World background is good for now.

A good opening that

will get you stuck on

it.

Wow!! I recommend

this book to you and

promise you won't

regret it.

Kudos to the writer

you really are

creative!!

Interesting premise with a good writing quality. The pacing is also good, not too fast or slow. The world building is also detailed enough for easier visualization, but what I liked the most were the character interaction. I have only read about 7 chaptere, but kudos to the author for doing a great job.

Overall, 10/10. Will come back for more chapters when it’s about 50 or so ^^

A good read, mmorpg novels are one of my favorite genres, if you like it too, you should give this novel a chance. I think it has the potential to be a excellent novel. As I have said in a comment, maybe you should read RSSG, if you haven't yet, to get some inspiration.

So far, l enjoyed the novel so much. lt's fun reading the novel, about the character design, l love it. World Background is great, keep up the good work author.

Starting this review, I can say the book has potential if nothing else. The author is aiming for something unique, despite tackling one of the most troublesome genres to make unique IMO (The video game genre). I love how diverse classes and sub-classes are. It proves that there's room for a great World Building which is a good sign.

Synopsis: I came to learn that a long synopsis isn't the way to go unless you add some real flavor and spice to it. Not to say your synopsis is bad, just that the cold reality is that a lot of people seem to skip the synopses or skim through them unless there's something present to grab their attention. Would recommend maybe cutting the synopsis a little or adding something to make it more worthwhile.

Story Development: I gave this 5 stars. The author seems to have everything planned out which makes the story more enjoyable and gives it direction.

Writing quality: Gave this a 4. In terms of grammar, kudos to the author. Pretty good and far from unreadable which many will appreciate. However, I took away a star for one reason and that's vocabulary. While the grammar is good, there are a lot of unnecessary words or phrases that could be made shorter with the use of more concise words that get to the point. I pointed out an example in just the second sentence of the first chapter. There are quite a few instances where shorter sentences could be made in both narration and dialogue.

Character Design: Honestly, I don't usually mark this but I decided to make this the first book I actually marked it (sorry lol. Decided that if the author describes their character then I'll grade how well it was done). I gave this a four. Simply because the descriptions were kinda plain. I'm probably nit-picking but I like when descriptions bring flair and pizazz to the writing quality. Terms like "Blue eyes, short blonde hair" could use additional flavor. Like "Gorgeous Blue eyes that reflected the color of the sky". I love stuff like that. You can keep it the way you want though. I'm just nit-picking as mentioned before.

Updating Stability: Judging from your weekly chapters, I see 0 chapters per week. Not sure what's up with that but gave it 5 anyway. You might have irl issues that prevent you from updating constantly.

World Background: Gave this a 5. Done well IMO. I could nit-pick this too but I'll let it slide because that would be too harsh. You detailed the World the characters are in pretty well. Good job author!

Finally, I must say this book has potential. Readers, if you're looking for something interesting, take a look at this one. Positive you have at least an 80% chance of enjoying. Overall 4.6. Keep up the good work author!

In terms of grammer and plot as of chapter 25 there is not much better on the entire site. I can’t judge writing stability as this is the first day but as long as we get 1-3 chapters a day this series will definitely be in the top. Cant judge world building either as we are only at the start but I have high hopes.

Even though this genre is heavily written about, the author does a great job of framing it in a new and refreshing way. The dialogue seems real, and the world building is well done. Please keep up the good work and continue writing!