The novel is written with detailed world-building and while there are a few mistakes, there will always be room for improvement for every book. It has great potential and only needs a lot of exposure. The flow of the story is smooth. Kudos to the author!
"As for you," Elias pointed at Duncan, "for three elements, it's better to use the one at the start of the chain, so focus on your fire element. Your circulation should be done in explosive, short-term burst. Move quickly, then stop, then move again. Keep this up until you can gather more in one go compared to the usual, steady circulation."
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