Overpowered MC with lack of wits and cruel , no rival , no love interest, no family, or even allies, just NPC subordinate. Bad story telling overly cautious MC that would slaughter everything because his lack of security and severe distrust. Not a wise leader, , just a cruel , dumb , demonic racist .
There is a tradition for all authors to give their books a five star so here I am to follow the tradition and give my book a shameless five star. The MC curses a lot in the beginning but give him some time and he'll learn how to control his mouth. Read it and find out for yourself if you like it or not (;
I really like what you got going on here, but the grammar is pretty bad. Regardless am enjoying this a lot, but please re-read your chapters at least 3 times before updating the story.Also, you might wanna correct some/alot of grammatical mistakes on the last chapters, because for a lot of people the first chapters are always their first impressions of the book.
I like this book and its pretty good but I dont get the MC would take a worm as his beast... honestly its stupid and isnt strong and its useless!!! And y did u stop writing when the book isnt finished!??? whats the point in writing if ur not going to finish the book!!????
I come across this story by accident and I said...why not? is just 10 chapters,I have nothing to lose.And how happy I am for reading this story... Yes,is short so what... Is a beautiful story.I don't know who the author is but he is a very talented one. I hope I can read other stories of him/her.He is very good. Keep up the good work and I hope to continuing impress us readers.
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