Hi! My second review here! Now I want everyone to know that it's been a great opportunity to write for you guys. Comments keep coming in, readers keep reacting, things like this makes me motivated to write more. Now as for the content, if you're new here, you might see some inconsistencies in the early chapters. It's not the grammar or spellings, but the characters.Now, I have addressed the situation and done my best in the chapters ahead to tell about the many characters that got introduced.Enough with this rant 😂, hope you will read this novel!And have a great year everyone!
based on just these seven chapter I can confidently say this book is one of a kind the quality is top notch the story is addictive. The only problem I have is sort of the mc hopefully he learns from some of his mistakes and grows more to become a person who want to live to see his family
Read what was free for a reference point. Author needs to go back and edit his earlier chapters. I don’t know how you can forget your own characters names. Wish that their was more world building going on even if it’s not know to the MC as the reader it helps with knowing if the story will be to their liking. MC at times seems to have different personalities and switches thought processes. Didn’t really fight a whole lot in the first phase even with all those warning so I was a little disappointed. Was hoping for an attack on the settlement to see the defenses in action. The whole shelter as a skill is kinda unique, wish the story fleshed out a bit more in the free chapters but good luck to the author and hope the update stability doesn’t drop
Really loving the book so far! Only early days so we don't have a whole lot of general world building, but we do have a lot of localized world building and I love that we're learning along with the MC about what's happening. I'm glad you haven't jumped straight to the MC getting betrayed by everything because that is a really overused plot device and while it works....it's not the best to see it in every other book lol
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I am worrying though about how they're going to handle getting every skill to level 5 if they keep getting more new skills and personally I would've immediately attempted to clear the 5 dungeons since they're getting a new skill every-time but is what it is. The could potentially just save the skills papers for after the 4 months? Idk how reliable that would be though. They really do need to focus on farming these skills though, I would be using them every second I could! lol
This is really good. I have been searching for a quality kingdom building novel that actually focuses on development and this takes the cake. Excited for more chapters! 👏🏾👏🏾
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I am worrying though about how they're going to handle getting every skill to level 5 if they keep getting more new skills and personally I would've immediately attempted to clear the 5 dungeons since they're getting a new skill every-time but is what it is. The could potentially just save the skills papers for after the 4 months? Idk how reliable that would be though. They really do need to focus on farming these skills though, I would be using them every second I could! lol