The story had enormous potential, but it was destroyed. From chapter 1~17, 12 chapters are 100% disposable. The main character should reincarnate facing the numerous difficulties, including psychological problems of being trapped in a newborn's body until adolescence, and show the enormous advantages and disadvantages of that time, until the beginning of the military campaigns.I expected a lot from this story, but it's a waste of time.
ngl I didn't expect to find a gem like this after skimming through the web novel writing competitions. definitely donating my power stones here after they recharge. keep up the amazing work
Good novel give it a chance it's about a mc with low talent getting transmigrated without a cheat. Only problem I feel is the unnecessary hype surrounding mc mysterious situation. I just read a fanfic where the author created hype about MC's father and didn't reveal him. And when the father finally got revealed, it was disappointing (he was revealed in ch 150).
Interesting story and do your best to improve grammar, if this is first time writing basically always poor at grammar but it can be improved and make sure the plot getting interesting for next
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