It's a great novel to read. it's pretty much good for like 300 chapters, until the plot got more complicated with new characters like joker and angelica and v. I'm not a hater for complicated plots but I have already got my fill with all those complicated tropes. I tried to read it till 400 chapters but then another twist and turns occured like death of his parents and Evie's father's appearance and the usual 'family taking away MC's love interest by force or threatening and MC's quest to get her back trope got and made the already bored me to get more bored of all this plot stuffing in together. The COC reference in guild war was kinda lame and I mostly skipped them and the plot about dating saya was not that interesting, well it's a nice plot but it could've been better if she wasn't that desperate.
Most deserving 5 🌟 to date!Excelent pacing with well thought-out characters in some unexpectedly hilarious situations.P.S. Try not grin like a naive innocent at least once a chapter. I dare ya!
For those that don't enjoy read things that involve man on man action, don't read this. The overall concept of the story is exquisite but the gay stuff was a turn off.
The ****?The prologue was VERY confusing, couldn't understand anything at all though the writing and grammar was decent..... UNTIL THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER. Just what? Random characters, random brackets and randomly switching between " and ' for no reason at all, the grammar of even one chapter has been worse than 80% of the other novels i've read, couldn't even take it seriously.The premise of the story is good and initially was very excited, but the grammar ruined everything. Im not even exaggerating, usually when I see people complaining about grammar I roll my eyes so hard im gonna go blind since it's usually decent. So yes, grammar sensitive readers, just forget it.
Please return this to the Trial Read section. This novel is really good and although it is kind of slow at the beginning, it has really interesting elements. It wasn't in Trial for long and it deserves a second chance.
this book is amazing as of rn. there are many things he could do but tbh its pretty good i wouldnt mind if he didnt explain the people a bit deeper in the future though.
This is definitely a hidden gem. A diamond in the rough. The story is amazing and the characters all have backgrounds that explain their personalities. Overall a great story and a must read.
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